No Nonsense
Although its paint is in abatement,
and it makes no major statement—
though it has no style or clout,
it still lets you in and out.
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lifelessons - a blog by Judy Dykstra-Brown 
I like how all those straight lines & right angles try to dominate the scene, but the electric meter intrudes with its audacious, impudent roundness. And the lil ditty is the cherry on top! Well done.
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I had a version where I cropped the meter but later decided it had to be there. Glad you concur.
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It’s amazing how you can tell the tale so well in so few lines!
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Thanks, Christine. I was fatigued and ready to sleep. Wouldn’t have stayed awake long enough to draw things out!
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Well said!
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Clever poem đŸ™‚
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I like your poem and, after all, letting you in and out is what a door’s meant to do.
janet
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Exactly.
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As long as a door works, I’m okay with it:) Have a great weekend!
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