When the shape of this poem fell naturally into the shape of a jar, I was intrigued to find that the lekythos was used both for oil to annoint the bride and the dead, and so it naturally supported the theme of my poem.
The assignment was to write a poem of exactly 55 words on the theme “extremely close” or “worlds apart.” This poem reflects all three criteria.
Nicely done!
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“… when will extra sensory wifi bring galleries together …” is a great line. Post that one to history!
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Was that a typo, Marilyn? It is galaxies that are being brought together. Is spellcheck running your life again?
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Indeed.. all our communications has certainly brought out, everything… both the bad and good.
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Nicely done 🙂
love.
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Loved the shape poem!
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Your poem looks amazing on the page, and asks crucial questions.
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That is so cool !
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I’m not sure we’re ready for that…we seem to have enough trouble bringing ‘us’ together on this one planet.
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Nicely done 🙂
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Interesting questions – and I think your conclusion applies here too.
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