Details from retablo “The Gleaners.” Painting by Anna O’Neglia, retablo and photo by jdb (Click on any photo to enlarge all)
Rich Harvest
The night that we brought in the wheat,
our weeks of labor now complete,
we raised our voices, beat our feet,
and in that stifling prairie heat,
weary and arm-sore, yet replete
with satisfaction for jobs well-done
earned in the dust and chaff and sun,
we ceased our labors and had some fun.
Hank gave the prim schoolteacher a treat
by lifting her from her safe seat
to move her to the fiddler’s beat.
Soon, her hairpins met defeat,
her wild hair anything but neat,
and Hank was heard to woo the miss
and then to plant a tender kiss.
She remembers all of this
now that their family’s complete
with Rita, Sarah, and little Pete.
Now every harvest, when you greet
each townsperson you chance to meet,
chances are they will repeat
how Hank brought in the wheat that year
and afterwards, conquered his fear
and dared to call the school marm, “dear.”
The prompt today is treat.
It’s a whole book in one poem.
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Yes, Marilyn!
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Yes.. but I changed Hank’s name to Cliff in the last stanza. Probably the schoolmarm’s idea! (Forgottenman to the rescue, as usual, and pointed it out. Now Hank has regained his identity._
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I love this sweet poem! A great story for sure!
Dwight
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Oh oh… but I changed our hero’s name in the last stanza.
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Not to worry – I kilt Cliff & resurrected Hank.
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OOPs! I missed that in the midst of all the romance!
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Oh good. Hope everyone else who read it before it was corrected were the same.
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It did not affect my reading of it at all!
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Thanks, Dwight.
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Ha! I knew the world’s violence would eventually get to even you!!
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elegance, sweet words, each line has its own musical melody!!!
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Thanks, Mihrank. Your comments are always generous.
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Fun story…I like forgottenman’s word…kilt. I didn’t notice the name change either, but that’s not surprising.
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The girl does not look like you at all.. just a similarity in plot between your actions!
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That’s why I’m so curious.
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Suddenly I was back reading Little House on the Prairie. I love the rollicking rhythm, feels like I should be dancing.
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This is so sweet… I love the story in this and how it says so much of the joy of bringing in the harvest.
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It was a big relief for the harvesters to beat the hail!!
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scintillating rhythm and rhyme to this harvest -‘Soon, her hairpins met defeat’ my favourite line!’
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Thanks, Laura. Egocentric to admire one’s own lines, but actually that was my favorite, as well, so I admire your taste in lines. Shhh. Don’t tell.
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A lovely blessing. Hank brought in a really big harvest, aND a family
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Ha. Love your comment.
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Thank you
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Haha, I had to look up “marm”. Calling her dear reminds me of an essay by George Saunders I just read yesterday, who was deeply touched when he heard his mentor, Tobias Wolff, call Wolff’s own son “dear.” Something about all of his strength and life wisdom culminating in gentleness.
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Equal parts lyrical and narrative- Nicely done!
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Fun stuff! I like the way the story played out visually as I read this. Could picture the school teacher dancing up a storm.
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Nice ballad of Hank and the school teacher.
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