Dark Against Light
The universe’s fine maquette
is light on dark and dry on wet—
her quietness and stillness set
against the thrum of castanet.
It is a sort of etiquette:
opposite versus opposite.
Victory gauged against regret.
Sunrise followed by sunset.
Every lottery and bet
boundless riches as well as debt.
It does no good to fuss and fret.
This irony is all we get—
nature one pure brightness set
as backdrop to our silhouette.
Want more views of this sunset? Go HERE.
The prompt today is one of the prettiest words in the English language: silhouette.
Love your poetry! 🙂
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Thanks, Patty. I love writing it.
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A lot of people do rhyming poetry on WP — but you do it really well. Not only does it rhyme, but it says something. I’m not really “big” on poetry, but I like yours rather a lot.
One of the very first “tricks” I learned in photography was how to create a silhouette. First, learning that if you stand in shadow and shoot into light, you create a dark “frame” around your picture. It has become a standard. The other was that back-lighting, often the bane of photographers, makes GREAT silhouette photos — as long as you don’t get too cluttered, graphically speaking. It has been a great fallback position for shots where you really want that sky and are willing sacrifice details in the foreground.
TMI?
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Thanks, Marilyn..for both the praise and tips!
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Gorgeous photos. Really.
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Thanks, dangerous one.
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“her quietness and stillness set
against the thrum of castanet.”
– excellent poem to match these shots –
p.s. why not join with other poets e.g. https://dversepoets.com/
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Thanks for the suggestion, Laura. I have posted in dverse before, I just forget to do so. I’ve done so now. Thanks for friends who remind me. Now, do you know where my glasses are?
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glad you posted 🙂
glasses probably together with mine!
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Ha.. run off together again, have they?
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Nice photos and sound in the poem. I liked this phrase of contrasts: “light on dark and dry on wet”
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Thanks, Fred.
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A lovely word indeed ~ I specially like this part:
her quietness and stillness set
against the thrum of castanet.
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Thanks, Grace. I love it when commenters quote favorite lines! I was pleased with those lines, myself. What comes out is as much a surprise to me as it is to the reader, sometimes when everything is working right.
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A joy to read. Thank you.
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Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Love your poetry and photos! 🙂
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Thanks, Debbie.
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Love the way you work on the contrasts between dark and light.
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Thanks, Bjorn.
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I’m not sure I’ve ever seen a poem with one rhyming sound. What an interesting exercise. Well done.
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Thanks, Sue. Every once in a while I do this. A fun puzzle.
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Lovely, Judy. And I learned a new word — maquette. I can’t remember ever seeing it before and It’s beautiful. Thanks!
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I love that word. My husband was a sculptor, so I had unfair advantage on you. I love learning new words through blogs. Beats dictionaries any day of the week.
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Really thought provoking. There is so much truth to ponder…victory guaged against regret. Enjoyed the photography, too!
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Thanks, Mary.How are you doing with your move? That was a big job!! (I’ll tell you a story about that punch line one day.)
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