Who can love
a bit of sweetness
so lacking
at its heart
that it’s more not there than there?
A donut lover!
The prompt for Day 7 of NaPoWriMo is to write a shadorma. Image by Matt Walsh on Unsplash, used with permission.
The shadorma is a six-line, 26-syllable poem. The syllable count by line is 3/5/3/3/7/5. So, like the haiku, the lines are relatively short.
not even a smidgen of whipped cream~?
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Nope.. no syllables left over. ;o)
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Cute. Made me chuckle.
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Haha! Just perfect
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Now I need a donut
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Who doesn’t need a donut, just at the mention of them?
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True
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A silly delight
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Always delighted to delight you, Derrick…
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🙂
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