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Praying Mantis
Now that the sun has vanished and the desert air turned cold,
some of the insects vanish, but others have turned bold.
Small winged gnats bask under the lamplight’s surrogate sun.
Motionless, they seem to sleep, their daylight flitters done.
They colonize the body of the terrace table lamp,
sunning in the bulb’s bright glow, absorbing every amp.
A single different visitor ascends my sister’s back,
as though he seeks the warmth and light the night air seems to lack.
She does not feel his presence. So far, he’s brought no harm.
He spreads out on the blanket of her light-warmed arm.
More stick-with-arms than insect, he seems inclined to stay.
Secure in his establishment, it seems as though he may
settle there for good, but then he chooses to decamp
by making an impromptu leap onto the terrace lamp.
Motionless, as though caught up in silent meditation,
nothing seems to interrupt his profound cogitation.
But then he leaps up higher, closer to the light,
the globe’s gleam growing warmer at this greater height.
The smaller denizens of light seem calm and unperturbed.
They continue slumbers largely undisturbed,
but suddenly I notice their numbers have diminished,
the mantis washing off his arms as though he has just finished.
He draws one and then another arm through his lethal jaws,
as though they’re violin bows moving without pause.
His music has no volume. The sawing of his bows
creates no funeral music. No sins do they expose.
For awhile he stands unmoving, the heat and light ideal
for aiding his digestion of his midnight meal.
The moon cuts through the darkness, dividing it in layers
as the unmoving mantis seems to say his prayers.
Then, when he leaps into the dark, I turn out the light
and trundle off to bed as well, bidding you good night.
Prompts today are insect, impromptu, establishment, trundle and cold.
It is amazing what you could do with a tiny insect, Judy. Brilliant!
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I had about five times this many pictures, but so many were repetitious.. and I see on viewing the post that some of these are, as well. I had so many of him “combing” his legs with his jaws but I must have mistakenly erased them. Too bad. It was fascinating.
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Pictures are great, but your poem – it’s an entire story in verse.
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Thanks, Dolly. We were fascinated by him. Karla and I and Patti watched him for at least a half hour.
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Your fascination is perfectly conveyed through your poem.
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Wonderful words and images 🙂 🙂
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Thanks, Bushboy. I think this observation of critters is something we have in common.
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It is Judy 🙂
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Love this. They are fascinating critters. Very vivid words. And pics.
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I always found these rather scary bugs, but was also warned to not kill them because they killed other insects and were “protected.” I think it was my mother protecting them, but to this day I may be afraid of them, but I won’t hurt them either. Great writing. Again!
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I’ve never seen a brown one before. Ours are much larger and green, but this was also a male and they are much smaller than the females. I did a blog once with photos I took of a female climbing the wall of my studio with a male on her back, but I can’t find it.
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You got REALLY close to him. I’m impressed.
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That first photo gives good perspective
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Thanks, Lisa. I think he was unaware of being observed, obviously.
Yes. In truth he was the smallest mantis I’ve ever seen. The females are larger and in Mexico they are bright green with a huge abdomen. The males there are much smaller as well, however.
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What a wonderfully detailed observation of a mantis in action! (Called “praying” but obviously “preying” is more apt.) I’ve seen them in a variety of colors, and once saw a video of one catching a hummingbird at a feeder! Vicious!!!
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They even eat toads and frogs. Trying to figure out how.
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It is quite astonishing, yes.
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