Oops… Looks like I used the incorrect prompt stanza for today’s Tan-Renga. Here is the one I should have used, by Georgia. Hers are the first three lines, mine are the bottom two. (A Tan-Renga is a poem written by two people. The first issues a challenge, the second answers it)

Dykstra-Brown photo
a dream in a dream
sand slipping through old fingers
autumn leaves turn red
replaced in time with green
and sandcastles shaped by a newer touch.
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.mx/2016/05/carpe-diem-tan-renga-challenge-month_8.html
There has to some changes for the better. Rightly so Judy!
Hank
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Changes are Always good, … nice second stanza Juday.
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Sorry I mis-typed “Judy”
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No problem.. Thanks for the nice comment. Spelling doesn’t count.
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