Mutability
It
is life.
We can’t fight
the truth that we
were born to those rules
that return us to soil
from whence we have been lifted
time after time, metamorphosed
from light to shadow, from breath to wind,
to rise and fall in some eternal plan
we have no chart for except for what we see
in ripening grain and bread upon the table,
oceans raised into the air to fall as springtime rain.
Why can’t we see
we can’t control
our universe
but instead fall
like autumn leaves
down to the earth?
The above poem was written to this prompt: Write a poem in “Tree of Life” poetic form about changes, impermanence, and strength.
‘Tree of Life’ poetic form:
- An uplifting poem in 19 lines;
- Syllabic: 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10-11-12-13-4-4-4-4-4-4;
- Unrhymed;
- Alignment: Centered

Judy this is simply beautiful and your reflections are spot-on
‘from light to shadow, from breath to wind
to rise and fall in some eternal plan ‘
💞
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Aha.. what were you doing up so late as well, or were you up early?
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I’m intrigued by the name of your blog. Are you willing to explain it? I’m seeing a poet as a painter. Is this close?
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I was up early Judy, well earlyish 😄
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And I had not yet gone to bed…
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A beautiful poem Judy. So well presented too.
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Thanks, Sadje. Waiting to see yours!
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This is such a beautiful, philosophical piece, Judy. Gorgeous ❤
Much love,
David
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And thanks to you for always reminding me of the new prompt, David.
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That’s how I roll 😇
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Hi, Judy 👋🏻
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the wonderful Willow, is now live:
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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Judy ~
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the wonderful Nigel Byng, is now live:
Enjoy! ❤️
Much love,
David
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Beautiful poem and photo, Judy! We are transforming ourselves every minute, no need to fight against it. Thanks for writing a beautiful Tree of life poem for my prompt.
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Thanks, Elizabeth, for your kind words.
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you pose such a thoughtful and reflective question
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Indeed this is a marvelous reminder of the circle of life – we participate either with or without conscious effort! ❤
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