Crowded Secret
This secret
shared with only you
has become crowded.
Like a party with too many guests,
it spills up the staircase
and into private rooms.
This secret with only room for two
has nudged you out of my confidence
as this one and this one and this one
crowd in to offer advice
just as though
they had been invited.

What a wonderful photo to go so well with the wonderful words you have written! Love it
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I photographed these two little girls at a summer camp we gave for kids in our pueblo. They were so wound up in their conversation.
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This one is sweet, even though the topic is betrayal.
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Thanks, Eilene. Exactly the mood I was aiming for!
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The photo is perfect for your poem. Very nicely done 🥰
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Very neat
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You’ve used such a fitting image Judy.
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Well done, Judy.
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