Oops… Looks like I used the incorrect prompt stanza for today’s Tan-Renga.  Here is the one I should have used, by Georgia.  Hers are the first three lines, mine are the bottom two. (A Tan-Renga is a poem written by two people.  The first issues a challenge, the second answers it)

Dykstra-Brown photo

a dream in a dream
sand slipping through old fingers
autumn leaves turn red

replaced in time with green
and sandcastles shaped by a newer touch.

http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.mx/2016/05/carpe-diem-tan-renga-challenge-month_8.html