I am so happy that Christine stopped by my yardsale word giveaway. Her reward for taking some extra words off my hands was this wonderful poem that she conceived of!!! Now I hope someone takes the words she didn’t use and constructs yet another. Let’s see if we can get rid of all of these excess words!
“Look what they’ve done to my hide, Ma!”
Fellow blogger Judy Dykstra-Brown was having a yard sale on leftover words over at her blog, so I’ve claimed a few and used them in this bit of whimsy.
SIMPLE GRAY
And what’s wrong with simplicity
is what I’d like to know?
Before this rank duplicity
I could humbly come and go
without the public squawking
just like a bunch of parrots—
or little children stopping
to stuff my mouth with carrots.
For someone thought — insane-ness!
They’d add some brilliant hues
and liven up my plain-ness.
So now I’ve got the blues!
These artists brought their teacher—
I think they stood in queue
to add, each one, some creature
and make me into a zoo!
Now I wear this dumb menagerie.
Can you tell my face is red?
My own mother wouldn’t know me!
Are those rain clouds overhead?

Love Melanie Safka … Cheers Jamie.
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Adorable idea! Great poem.
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