
First Steps
Blushing cheeks and fluttered lashes,
cotton frocks with satin sashes.
That first dance, paired with a boy,
equal parts of fear and joy.
Sweaty palms and faltering feet.
A different style, each boy you meet.
Shyness, then—a major dose.
Terror he’ll hold you too close,
then, affronted when he doesn’t.
Wrong when he was and when he wasn’t
romantic in that pre-teen way,
as forward as that time of day
permitted, with your parents there.
Beaded foreheads, scraggly hair.
School dances never missed.
Holding hands, but never kissed.
Except one time, when cheek-to-cheek,
that butterfly kiss, furtive and meek.
Eyes met for just a moment, then,
to celebrate your mutual sin.
Oh the terrors and the joys
Of school dances and touching boys!
This is the second poetry challenge that resulted when Carol from the Relax blog posted a poem about her kittens that had an opening two lines I loved. Her poem veered off completely from those two lines, so I challenged her to write a new poem that centered around the opening lines. I did the same, but one of her images prompted a new prompt. This time I “dared” her to write a poem about butterfly kisses. She accepted the dare but said me first, so here it is. Carol, your turn. Post a link, please, after you’ve written your poem. When will this end? If anyone else cares to join in, you are most welcome. The prompt is “butterfly kiss.”
Oh, this is so sweet, Judy! I may have to hold off til tomorrow with my offering, but hopefully others will indeed join in!
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Memories of long ago days … except that the boys stood on one side of the room and giggled while the girls stayed on the other side, also giggling. BUT the girls danced with each other and the boys just stood there, giggling. Amazing we figured the whole thing out eventually.
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Adolescent vulnerabilities exquisitely expressed!
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Thanks, VM.
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Lol, there it is… such as it is.
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