Query
Have you a pattern for your life
wherein you’ve cut out stress and strife,
only allowing perfection?
Is every day a new confection—
cherry pie and chocolate cake?
No rejection? No heartbreak?
No erstwhile friends or jealous crazies—
your entire life a field of daisies?
It must be great, without a doubt,
but what have you to write about?
The prompt word today was pattern.
This poem is in need of a good title–one that gives an idea that it is written for writers without giving the ending away. I couldn’t think of one.. can you? Please help.
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Well written 🙂
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Thanks for reading and commenting, MSWM!
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You’re quite good at writing poetry. In fact, when I read your poems they make it sound so easy to write, but then when I try…my mind goes blank! So, I’ll just enjoy your poems. 🙂
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Thanks, Debbie. I’d be glad to keep writing them for you!!!
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Many days, my most consistent pattern is breaking the pattern? Enjoyed.
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“Breaking the Pattern” in rogershipp’s comment sounds good as a title.
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Thanks, Olga..Top contender so far!
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A Field of Daisies 🙂
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Is that Big Duck’s cake?
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That is my cake with a big duck on it!!!
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Well it looks delish!
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I’ve wondered the same thing! I do not have that problem.
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