
What fewer love stories there would be if we could see their endings—so many middles of romances left unread by those who read their last pages first. When I remember each past first kiss, it is in a mirror half obscured by the future reflected in it. One love is forever caught underwater where it gasps for air. Another is ashes floating out in rings to touch the edges of a lake which is shrinking inward from its banks, as though in complicity to aid their settling along its edges. Another lies in small droplets of blood on a road where it was ambushed, too late to be a message of anything but regret for love that died before the lover and a lover who died too soon. There are all these deaths of loves—like a class for the unfortunates who, kept in after school, are made to trace their lines again and again in the belief that love is taught by repetition and that wisdom comes from practice.
Beautifully written!
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Thanks, Jordan.
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This is incredibly poignant, and
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I love the beginning: “What fewer love stories there would be if we could see their endings.”
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you have so beautiful lines and great lesson!!
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Very insightful. And sad. Like my story (my blog=book). Maybe you’ll want to check it out too? If you do, please – from the beginning makes more sense. Have a lovely December!
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I try to never look down that road. Given where I am in life, looking at endings is such a terrible idea in every way. I think I won’t do that.
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sweetie really love
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my dream to find a rmantic woman to love me
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i love the romantic
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