Swimming in the Rainy Season
To the end of the pool and back again,
I love swimming in the rain.
The economy of it is such
that though you’re wet two times as much,
it’s clear as day to sage or dunce—
you only have to dry off once!
The first two lines of this poem came to me as I was trying to get in a hurried exercise session in the pool before dressing to drive into town to a poetry group I belong to. It was, in fact, raining, but there was no thunder and lightning as there always is at night, so I had put a shower cap on over my hair and done a half-hour session.
When I got back into the house after my pool session, I realized that I had only ten minutes until I had to leave, so I hurriedly scribbled the two lines down on a sheet of paper in the bathroom as I put on makeup and brushed my teeth. I finished it when I got back home a few hours later.
such a glorious feeling to this poem
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Just a little lark of a poem.
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Funny and true. Clever, too!
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Indeed!
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Clever. I like the immediacy of this. It’s as though the poem floated straight to paper from the pool. It’s charming for that reason. I liked it very much.
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That is exactly what happened. Thanks, Gay.
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Love the rhythm–and the tongue-in-cheekiness of the last line!
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Love the process of your creation as much as the poem itself
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I do, too, Bjorn. It’s fun to see what will crop up. Like volunteer grass or corn!
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Ah, I love this – its feeling is something I would like to experience too. It makes me want to learn swimming.
-HA
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Actually, I do pool aerobics more than swim, but I do swim some..a great feeling at night, as well, which is when I usually swim because I don’t do well in the sun. And it is great to swim in hot water under the stars. My pool is fed by mineral hot springs.
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Your photo and poem remind me of a wonderful time that I swam in the rain. It is a unique experience.
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I know. Made me wonder why I’d never done it before. I’ve been here with the same pool and the same hot mineral water in it for seventeen years!
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Very nice!. Wet twice as much but only have to dry off once.
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Ha.
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You can feel the motion. (K)
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