Multiple word prompt short story – A Telling Off.

I love this little short short by Kristian so wanted to share it.

Tales from the mind of Kristian

FOWC with Fandango — Challenge

“I think it’s totally deplorable an attractive pink flush rose in her cheeks as she raised her voice “I only see you once a weekand yet where do you decide to take me? Your Mother’s house!”

He hemmed and hawed trying to defend himself in the face of this surprising onslaught. He couldn’t really say anything, she was absolutely right so he opened his mouth to say so, but she interrupted him.

“No, don’t try to dissemble, I’ve had quite enough of your excuses” she stamped her foot this time, to emphasise her words. “Just what are you going to do about it?”

This time she gave him room to speak.

“Ok, you’re right. I admit that taking you to my Mother’s is a pretty lousy thing to do on our one day a week together but I couldn’t think…

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My blog, which started out to be about overcoming grief, quickly grew into a blog about celebrating life. I post daily: poems, photographs, essays or stories. I've lived in countries all around the globe but have finally come to rest in Mexico, where I've lived since 2001. My books may be found on Amazon in Kindle and print format, my art in local Ajijic galleries. Hope to see you at my blog.

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