Photo by Glenn Buttkus
Concrete Poem
(Exposed Aggregate)
You cut a channel through my flat heart,
straight and sure, as though it had not already been set.
Miracle worker. Perfect craftsman,
sculpting the impossible medium.
For the dVerse Poets Pub prompt. Go HERE to see poems by other poets answering the prompt.
Miracle indeed
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Beautifully written!
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Great minimalistic style with a poignant straight-to-the heart message!
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This is incredibly stunning! 💝💝 I love the brevity of this poem- poignant and piercing straight through the heart. Thank you so much for adding your voice to the prompt, Judy 😀
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Powerful poetry ~~ in few words! Great write.
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Wow, Judy…i think of the Holy Spirit transforming hearts!
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The mysterious “You” has to be spiritual; significant vibe off my image, cutting straight through the concrete and BS; thanks.
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Thanks Glenn, both for inspiration and kind words.
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Silly girl….
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;o) Are you going to La Manz this year? Next year?
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Yes, I am…Early Feb. Flying into P.V. See you there?
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Probably not, but perhaps.
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Love this one…
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Wonderfully Written! Good job!
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