Super Powers
In our wider world of pomp and dollar,
somehow power makes us smaller.
Distracts us from the metaphor
of what a super power’s for.
Those powers we seek In the vast world
wait within us to be unfurled.
In that world we’re given to create,
we hold the key to every gate.
We’re given vision, strength and power
to make a minute of an hour,
to leap ahead or lag behind
in our universe of mind.
I soar the heights. I swim the sea,
and delve the depths to try to free
those powers that I’ve found to be
in that vast space inside of me.
For Sylvia’s Prompt to write a poem about Power. Image by Junior Ferriera on Unsplash.
for the W3 Prompt 64
Go HERE to see other posts to this prompt.
And HERE is the correct link to see the prompt.

Judy – I think you wrote this for W3 #64, rather than W3 #63… am I mistaken?
#64 was the prompt related to “power”…
Much love,
David
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Ok I’ll correct.. but was this the correct prompt place? When I am directed to a prompt from a different source, I often have a terrible time finding the correct place to post. Part of my directional dyslexia..a curse.
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well, here’s the way it works:
first of all, all the W3 prompts are listed here:
https://skepticskaddish.com/category/poetry/poetry-prompt/
The link at the top of that list is the most recent prompt on any given week.
If you click on the top link on that list this week, you’ll be taken to this page:
This is the URL for this week’s W3, which is #64.
Once you have opened W3 #64, you should see a horizontal white rectangle below the prompt guidelines that says “Mister Linky” on it…
It looks like this:
Once you have clicked on that “Mister Linky” graphic, you’ll be able to add your link to the list of poets.
Does this help?
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Hi, Judy!
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt is now live!
And it’s hosted by the amazing Sadje!
Much love,
David
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BTW, your rhymes and line breaks are so perfect – I got totally sucked into the flow from line to line in this poem. It’s fantastic!
~David
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Good prompt word “power” and well executed poem expressing the power of it.
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Thanks, Sam.
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So beautifully said Judy.
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from the dao de jing, v 47 (witter bynner rendition) “there is no need to go outside for further seeing…” You’ve expressed it so well here, Judy.
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Thanks, Lisa. I think the wisdom we learn for ourselves is the wisdom that serves us best. The rest is just preaching.
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Judy, I believe that Witter Bynner lived somewhere near where you live. Have you seen any statues, plaques, info about him in museums there?
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I had never heard of him but yes, he did live in Chapala where D.H. Lawrence lived and D.H. based a character in The Plumed Serpent on Witter. A friend of mine bought the D.H. Lawrence home and turned it into a hotel.
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Oh Wow! This is the kind of info I was hoping for. Witter Bynner’s rendition of the TaoTeChing is the first one I ever read. It remains my favorite. So cool about the Bynner-Lawrence connection.
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Great poem – very well expressed, Judy.
I see that you are into David’s W3 game now. I enjoy reading the contributions.
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I don’t have a permanent link to it… just found this week’s link on someone else’s post. i am hopeless at figuring out what the actual link is for prompts unless I have it in my favorites..I have a severe dyslexia when it comes to finding things…not an exaggeration.
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It’s not dyslexia LOL, it’s called selective memory. David himself is a very talented poet, and his blog is a hangout for other talents. Very impressive.
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Yes I read his blog and have from his first posts. I just need a link that will work each week for that particular prompt. All of the regular prompts I follow I have in my favorites so I can click on them and go to their prompt for the day. Can’t find one for W3…just the prompts for each particular week. I’ve asked David if he can supply one. Spatial dyslexia is a type of dyslexia that is closely associated with facial blindness which I have as well and it has gotten much worse as I get older. I have no problem with folks I know well but have a terrible time remembering who new acquaintances are…and trouble finding things that are not in the place I expect them to be.
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I know what spatial dyslexia is; I was kidding, Judy!
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Yes.. I saw your LOL, but just in case, decided to over-explain, as usual. Looking at the actual definition of “spatial dyslexia,” it occurred to me that that may be the reason I became a writer as it says one way people with this disorder straighten things out is by talking or writing about them! I’d never thought of that before. It may be that doing art (in my case, arranging things) is also a way to sort them out. Every time I’m sure I’ve figured everything out, something creates a new insight. In this case, it was your comment. Thanks, Dolly!!!!
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I think I found one and have put it in my favorites. Fingers crossed.
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👍😻
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Judy I enjoyed the rhythm of this poem – it was like riding a horse! Exhilarating! And the rhyme is so beautifully done!
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Thanks, Murisopsis.Glad you enjoyed it. Have you ever told us your name? You revealed Sparky’s but I can’t find yours in any of your posts.
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Judy I’ve never really kept my name a secret – it’s Valerie. Sparky on the other hand – I don’t think I’ve ever communicated his real name…
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I really like your first two lines – nice twist in there
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Thanks, JYP!!!
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You’ve turned power on its head and it’s perfect! Controlling ourselves and our lives has got to be more rewarding than lording over other folks (or the world).
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Very true, the power within is the most important.
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