Evensong
The mare lifts her head,
Her edges framed by sunlight
as, with a wounding grace,
her colt strips leaves from branches tender
as his own lithe legs
tangled in new willow.
Clouds form a new volcano behind the mountains.
Beer bottles stick, almost buried, from scabbed truck ruts feet deep.
A man with his mewling cow on a rope
follows long plaintive cries
in the direction of her almost-grown calves.
In the immense spreading Grandmother of trees,
the egrets open their back feathers
like bottlebrush blooms,
and fan after fan, They stroke the air.
White against the vivid green leaves.
For the dVerse Poets prompt.
See how other poets responded to the prompt HERE
This is a beautiful poem, accompanied by lovely photos! Were you hit by the recent hurricane that hit Acapulco?
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No. We are a looooong way from Acapulco.
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A beautiful, evocative poem Judy
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Thanks, Sadje.
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You’re most welcome
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Nicely bucolic
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Words that paint a pretty picture. Contentment.
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Beautiful, Judy.
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Such vivid, tender word-painting.
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Thanks, Mitch.
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Beauteous words. Images. The coat on that colt!
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I love the scenery you paint… or may I call it a pastorale?
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What a lovely word. I may change the name of the poem!!!
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Actually, your comment made me go back and read the poem and I found an error in the last stanza!If you were to rereread it, it might now make more sense. Thanks for bringing my attention not to the error but to the poem–which led to finding the error.
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That is what great about comments
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Very nice.
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Beautiful photos and the verses just captured the scene.
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