When you hop aboard the bread train, there’s no negotiation.
Folks aboard the bread train become a congregation.
It’s a happy wagon, a life-fulfilling ride.
Everything comes easy when you are inside.
Don’t bother about lowlifes who wait along the tracks.
You can’t be responsible for everybody’s backs.
This trip through life is better if you have some dough.
These folks who have an easy ride everywhere they go?
That there may be enough for all is what they do not know.
They want no interference with the status quo.
If folks don’t have what they do, it’s just because they’re lazy.
Those who think the bread train crowd will feed them are just crazy!
Every riff-raff wannabe can’t have what he wants.
If he can’t afford the bread train, let him eat croissants!!
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BAM!
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Luv the humour. Luv the rhyming. Well Done
much♡love
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I second Ana’s comment. BAM! I just love this one!
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A cheerful poem that captures the rhythm of a train in its rhyming couplets, Judy!
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Kim, cheerful? I think you really missed the intent here.
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The tone is upbeat – cheerful and ironic.community
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Be well, Kim.
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I’ve just eaten two
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Are you related to Marie Antoinette (or perhaps) to Jean-Jacques Rousseau?
Acerbic humor
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I’ve heard that that quote was erroneously attributed to Marie Antoinette. That said, I may be related to the boy who stuck his finger in the dike, but not to Rousseau or Antoinette!
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Love this!
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Very sharp.
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I feel the rhythm of your train in this and I love it! The story, the rhyme, the bread!!!
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Clever!
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Ooh! From cakes to croissants! The riff-raff better not read this poem! Love it, Judy!
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I do love bread
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Don’t we all?
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Any suggestions for my post on Bread
https://nichenarrative.blog/white-bread-vs-brown-bread-a-comprehensive-guide/
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I like both. Depends on the recipe. That said, a really dense, moist tasty brown bread is hard to beat.
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