
Dropped Glove
When love first blooms it seems eternal love
Impossible that it might fall away
What use is love that doesn’t choose to stay?
At first love seems to fit one like a glove
that warmly cloaks our hand both night and day
When love first blooms it seems eternal love
Impossible that it might fall away
We know not what love’s garment is made of.
We only note when it begins to fray
and loosens more and more along the way.
When love first blooms it seems eternal love
Impossible that it might fall away
What use is love that doesn’t choose to stay?
For dVerse Poets we were to write a Madrigal poem. Here are the rules for an English Madrigal: :Content: Often includes a theme of love
*Usually written in iambic pentameter.
*Comprised of three stanzas: a tercet, quatrain, and sestet.
*All three of the lines in the opening tercet are refrains.
Form: A thirteen-line form in three stanzas:
Stanza 1] Tercet -Three lines
Stanza 2] Quatrain – Four lines
Stanza 3] Sestet – Six lines
[L1] A (refrain 1)
[L2] B1 (refrain 2)
[L3] B2 (refrain 3)
[L4] a
[L5] b
[L6] A (refrain 1)
[L7] B1 (refrain 2)
[L8] a
[L9] b
[L10] b
[L11] A (refrain 1)
[L12] B1 (refrain 2)
[L13] B2 (refrain 3)
Go HERE to read other poems created to this prompt.
This is so good Judy.
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Oh how sad when that ‘glove that warmly cloaks our hand both night and day’ is dropped, Judy. I especially like the lines:
‘We know not what love’s garment is made of.
We only note when it begins to fray
and loosens more and more along the way.’
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A beautiful metaphor
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you are a genius wordsmith. This is a realistic look at what happens and the photo is also marvelous. Ann
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wonderful and very well crafted.
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2nd try: Concept well-articulated. My favorite part is the turn:
We know not what love’s garment is made of.
We only note when it begins to fray
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I love that used a glove metaphor for the love relationship. A fitting ending question with: What use is love that doesn’t choose to stay? Thanks for joining in.
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Thanks, Grace.
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Stunning poem!
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Thanks, Kim.
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Fantastic metaphor, Judy, especially the loosening fit! Loved it!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thanks, Yvette.
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I love the image/metaphor of the glove, a fiine madrigal Judy.
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I love your madrigal, Judy, especially the refrain, “What use is love that doesn’t choose to stay?”. What a fine metaphor you incorporated.
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What use is love that doesn’t choose to stay? Very true message there…
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