Tick-Tock
Back when there was magic,
before the world was broken,
in my childhood’s comfy nest,
the major language spoken
is remembered as a ghost of words
blown in on a breeze.
Life was one great treasure,
set out for us to seize.
The last war newly over,
the news of the time
seemed to tell of happenings
peaceful and benign.
No need for bomb shelters
or ICE or interventions.
My childhood passed most peacefully,
mainly free of tensions.
Time seemed to drag on slowly
from birthday to Halloween.
There seemed to be a hundred years
between toddler and teen.
But now that I am 78, life whizzes by as though
it’s making up for all those years when it passed by so slow.
And peace that in my innocence I thought would always last
has become just a memory of an idyllic past.
for The Sunday Whirl 729 the prompt words are: magic back broken nest seems drag news breeze life ghost need tell
They’re always good, Judy, but that one’s particularly so 🥰
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Sorry to remind you of this, Sam.
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Beautifully done Judy
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Thanks, Sadje.
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You’re most welcome
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Thanks, Sadje.
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You’re very welcome
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Beautifully said Judy – it is a fact that time speeds up the older we get – sods law!
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Very good Judy. Time marches on quicker as we get older.
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ain’t that the truth! Good job.
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Such a sound message in this excellent poem
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Thanks, Derrick.
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This is really good, and the last verse is so relatable – even though I’m a year older! They say that time speeds up because every year is a smaller percentage of our life.
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Completely. related to this, Judy. Life is whizzing by. I am 76.
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Just a kid!!!
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