Transforming an opponent from a rival to a friend
might not affect the outcome of who wins out in the end.
Whatever escapade you face—
what bout or match or game or race—
your gains can’t be identical. The trophy you may lack.
You might not be the leader of the athletic pack,
but you’ll still be a winner when all is said and done,
for though you’ve lost the race, it is a comrade that you’ve won.
I need to choose three poems to submit for a poetry competition. These are the 5 poems suggested by friends and bloggers as ones I should submit. If you have the time, I would very much appreciate your telling me which three you would choose. Or, if there is another poem that should be on the list, let me know. I only have 3 days to do this. Help!!!
— Poem # 1
The Prompt: Some words really sound like the thing they describe. Do you have an example of such a word? What do you think creates this effect?
I’ve Always loved the word “flutter,” which was the original title of this poem. What better word could be used to describe the motion of moth wings? The moth described in my poem, however, was noticeable because of its lack of flutter. It landed upon my computer screen like a magnetized object to metal and remained there for over two hours. The moth pictured in the poem is the actual moth. Tiny and green, it became part of my writing experience. Since it had chosen to remain in one position, directly on my screen, I was forced (by choice) to write around it, which could not help but influence the poem that resulted.
—- Poem #2
The Prompt: Middle Seat—Your neighbor on the plane/bus/train is very chatty. Do you try to switch seats, go for a non-committal brief small talk, or make this personyour new best friend?
Reading
The book I’d chosen for the plane ride sat open on my lap as the stranger on the plane opened himself— his life pulled leaf by leaf from his family tree. His words came faltering and sputtering at first, like water from a tap newly opened, then rushed out cool and even, telling of a life that was a richness of jobs held, wives loved, children raised. He is going back to Mexico for the Saint’s day of the small pueblo where he was born. The parade. The effigies. The life-sized Santos standing in their boats to tour the lake like kings. I’ve been to this celebration; and as he speaks, I sit like an honored guest beside him, reading my memory as well. “Come,“ he tells me, giving me directions and a date. I do not tell him I have been to that fiesta years ago. “Perhaps,” I say, sliding his instructions to his family’s house to form a bookmark in the book now closed upon my lap, then go on, listening. What were we born for if it was not to read each other? In the rush from the plane, that old man falls behind and it is you I see as I come out into the world of Mexico, leaving the plane ride, immigration and customs in its place behind the swinging doors. This flower that you give me is a mystery book. I read it—stamen, pistil and corolla— as well as the hand that holds it out to me and then the warm embrace that you enfold me in.
—– Poem #3
After NaPoWriMo was over last year, I missed the daily prompts and so asked friends and followers of my blog to send in topics. One friend asked me to write about my dogs and another suggested the topic of dreams. I combined their prompts in this poem. – The Dogs Are Barking
They break the morning––a daily rite. It’s just a warning. The dogs won’t bite. Two strangers talk but pass unseen. I doze, they walk, with a wall between. I lie here posed between thought and sleep. My eyes still closed, I’m swimming deep. I resist the trip––that journey up–– preferring to sip from the dreaming cup whose liquid darker and bitter thick reveals a starker bailiwick than schedules, crafts, menus, schemes. Much finer draughts we quaff in dreams. I try to sink back into sleep, once more to drink of waters deep; but the dogs still bark. They leap and pace. My dreams too dark for this morning place. Those dreams lie deep and intertwined, wanting to creep back up my mind. But its slippery slope is much inclined and provides small hope that I will find again, that world well out of sight where truth lies curled, still holding tight–– as oysters cleave and then unfurl with mighty heave, the priceless pearl of that other mind that slips the knife beneath the rind of our daily life. Time is a brew of present, past and future, too—whatever’s cast to stew and steep the story rare that’s buried deep in dreams laid bare. Dreams are stories we tell ourselves that draw our quarry to bookstore shelves. Pinned to the page, they reach their height and bring our sage self to the light. But the dogs are barking. They’re hungry, cross. When I rise to feed them, the poem is lost.
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Poem #4
The prompt: Write a poem making use of three of the five senses.
Moving the Divan
I don’t want to write a poem using three of my five senses. I want to move the large divan to a 45-degree angle and throw away the love seat to make room for another file cabinet for my poetry. It’s stacked all over, stowed at least two times alphabetically in boxes beneath my desk, hidden in the custom headboard of my bed.
File cabinets fill the bottom of every closet. I’ve come to cutting up poems to make collages and selling them. That’s how much I need another file cabinet. So it’s either more poems in the future or the love seat. I don’t want to talk about how the love seat smells. It’s Jacaranda blooming time–– nothing smells like anything. I will concede, however, that it is grained like the crepe of my father’s neck–– like cowhide or whatever that leather is that has impressions like thousands of small rivers forming a network. I don’t want to look up exactly which leather it is on Google. That one action could divert me for at least an hour. And I don‘t want to tell you any more about what the loveseat is “like.” I want to tell you that I bought it when I found a pee stain on the fabric of my old couch after the last party a friend attended before he died. I cleaned it, then sold it along with its larger brother and bought a stain-proof leather sofa with matching loveseat. I don’t want to worry about what friend sits where or exclude anyone from my guest list on account of my divan. This leather feels like hanging on to old friends for as long as you can. This loveseat feels willing to be given up for poetry, and I know exactly where it should go. I want it to have a good life in a coffee bar, in the library section. My loveseat will smell like espresso and bear the crayon marks of children who come to play there. It will be made love on by the young couple who live upstairs. It will have her homemade cheesecake crumbs fall into its crevasses. Its very fibers will soak up the music that is played there and the poetry that’s read there. It will be worn out by life instead of time. It will predecease its matching full-sized sofa, but it will be full of smells, textures, tastes and when people sink into it, you will hear its sound–– that sigh of comfort or grunt of momentary discomfort as knees bend in penance for the comfort that is to come. The rivers in the leather will be smoothed out by the bottoms of those drinking espresso and frappuccinos and red wine and cerveza, growing wider with the cheesecake, settling in comfortably for conversation and music and refreshment. Oh, and poetry. And that, my friend, is how thinking about rearranging furniture became poetry, and how that very poem may find a home.
— Poem # 5
The Prompt: Is there a cause—social, political, cultural, or other—you passionately believe in?
The cause I most believe in is getting in touch with your authentic and true inner voice. Would that more people involved in making decisions that will alter our world would do so. This poem is really about the creative process where, when done right, there is only truth. It is also about all the things that get in the way of this process.
Let There Be Light
My mind is a growling dog. While I stew and fuss, fulfilling lists, she jumps the screendoor, beckoning. Rude me, to turn my back on the only playmate who wants to play the same games I do every day, every hour, because I fear that initial plodding through silt page after page in search of the stream of words. Sometimes boredom yawns so wide that I have to enter it, to wander its inner closet where for decades only cobwebs have stirred. In some dark corner where I spank the dog or search the bedside table drawers of a lover called out at midnight, I find the river’s source, but then the phone rings and I’m off gathering crumbs from a forest path, leaving lost children stranded in their own story. Stray puppies—I collect every one, wild orange funnel flowers and guava washed in an afternoon kitchen just before the invasion of five o’clock sunlight. All of them I carry back to hidden places to rub against each other and ignite into the language of this place where life goes in, plays dress-up, but emerges nude, like poetry. —-
If there is a different poem you think should be included, please let me know! Just three days to do this! Many Thanks for helping. I value your opinion.