2 thoughts on “The Deadline (A Tweeted Poem) April 5 Poetry Posting for NaPoWriMo”

1. ann oneal garcia April 5, 2013 at 6:05 PM

   Just awesome, Judy. Love first words, dogwoman, the way they are paired. Then the way they communicate and the human being tires of the game before the dog does. It’s neat the way the words all run together, like images and feelings and colors and textures and and and

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2. grieflessons Post authorApril 5, 2013 at 6:28 PM

   To be a Tweet, it could only be 140 characters, including spaces. I couldn’t whittle out the last 23 spaces until it occurred to me I could take out the spaces. Glad you liked it. J

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