In response to The Daily Post’s writing prompt: “These Horns Were Made for Tooting.”Today, share something you love about yourself — don’t be shy, be confident! — but that few other people know about you or get to see very often.
I don’t have very much patience for submitting poems for publication or entering contests or trying to find agents or publishers. I’ve played the games at times but it never seemed worth the time spent. One exception was when I decided to enter a number of contests at once. I believe I entered ten, but it may have been less. Rejection after rejection came in. There were a few near-misses where I was a semifinalist. Then, the last letter came in and lo and behold, I had won first place in a national poetry contest. My notification was accompanied by a check for $500! The judge’s comment included the statement that she had awarded me the prize for my sheer audacity in submitting a poem that took twelve minutes to read. Ha. Here is the poem. I will grant a special prize to anyone who makes it to the end! (I believe this is a shortened version of the poem I submitted.)




Yep, seems like a winner to me.
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That is good. And yes, it’s long, but it’s a poem by/about an appetite, so …
“My appetite shrinks to the size of a chair” is wonderful.
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Well done, that is one lengthy poem!
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Yes. No one was there to stop me!
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Good for you! The secret to winning competitions will forever escape me!
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I love it! I don’t think you won because the poem was so pong. I think you won because it was a winner.
I’m tired so I’ll come back to it again when my brain feels more lively.
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Pong! I wrote pong! I AM tired!
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I’m always forgetting to proof before I hit send. I understood what you meant.
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I like typos, they add interest – and sometimes they’re hilarious!
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Judy, especially with illustrations, this would make a wonderful chapbook.
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Thanks, Relax. If only I’d taken pictures at the time. Probably all of these restaurants and Coffeetopia have changed by now. The location was Boulder Creek, California near Santa Cruz, where I lived 14 years ago.
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Wow that’s a pretty impressive poem and good for you for winning the prize! You deserved it 🙂
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Thanks, Jackie. My mom thought so, too! ;o)
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What a whimsical poem! I have this image of your appetite being one huge mouth wandering around like the dog in Family Circus, consuming everything in sight (of course spitting out the pizza boy and anchovies :)).
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Ha. Exactly! You got it. Not to mention its huge ego concerning attention at poetry readings!
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But, you gave me an idea about an illustrative photo for this poem. Thanks, Chi!!! I’m going to add it now.
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Haha, perfect photo!
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Looks like a short story to me 🙂
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Great work poet laureate 😉 I enjoyed your appetite!
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;o)
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I happily made it to the end, what’s my prize?
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I’ll write you a poem about the topic of your choice! Or would you rather have $1,000?
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