Blueberry, Blueberry, Blackbird Pie
Gotta get a cookie. Gotta eat some pie.
Gotta have some sugar, do or die.
Grab a fork and grab a spoon.
Sugar shack opening pretty soon.
Hey lolly hey lolly, blueberry pie.
Hope to have some by and by.
Old Mother Crank put a pie up on the shelf.
Thought she’d eat it all herself.
Along came a blackbird who grabbed a bit of crust,
then the whole damn pie as the old lady cussed.
Hey lolly, hey lolly, no more pie.
Blackbird made it go bye bye.
Old Mother Fussbudget loaded up her gun.
She didn’t have pie, but she was gonna have some fun.
When she spied that blackbird way up high,
she fired her gun up in the sky.
Hey lolly, hey lolly, no berry pie.
Just that blackbird winging through the sky.
Now old Mother Wigglewaggy baked another pie.
It’ll be ready in the blinking of an eye.
She had two pieces, then she had a third,
Since she didn’t have fruit, she used the bird!!
Hey lolly, hey lolly, no bird pie.
I prefer my blackbird served on rye!
Today’s NaPoWriMo prompt was to write a call and response poem.

Judy, there was a lovely lilting song concealed in that rhyme that made me feel like I’d known it all my life as I sang it silently to myself. Do you know anything similar or did it just come to you as you wrote it? Great fun, thanks. Anton.
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No–not consciously, although we were to write a sea chanty type poem with an answering refrain so I definitely was trying to make it songlike without having actual music in mind.
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There is one blackbird that will no longer follow a career of nose-off-pecking!
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Outstanding! We could set this one to music ever, my oh my.
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Be my guest, Scott…The words come out easy for me but the music not so much…But, it was intended to be a song so if someone talented in that area did so, it would be fun!!
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i love it, you did a great job!!
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Thanks, “Someone,” whoever you are.
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This one you really need to set to music. I can hear it with a lute accompaniment.Or possibly autoharp? And a hey lolly lolly to you, too 🙂
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