
!!!Fragile!!!
Just as I’m becoming less agile,
all of me is turning fragile.
Flesh on flesh and bone on bone,
Nature won’t leave me alone.
Bruise more easily, skin tears easier.
Looking up now makes me queasier.
Can’t be trusted on a ladder.
Larger hips but smaller bladder.
Lips are thinner, bones are brittler.
And suddenly, I’m two inches littler.
If Nature’s bound to fold and shrink me,
Really, now, wouldn’t you think she
could leave me with my height and lips
and do her shrinking around my hips?
The prompt today is “Fragile.”
Reading about aging in a poem makes it seems so much easier.
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We are all sisters under the (thinning) skin. You don’t seem to have aged as much as the rest of us, though. Mary, either! Good Sanderson genes.
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they should add a “love” button. why do i keep getting the feeling we’re long-lost sisters and don’t know it?
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I know. The other day I saw one of your poems you’d posted long ago and really did think I’d written it. I thought how much I liked it and that I barely remembered writing it–then saw your name at the end! Ha! It was your poem in praise of photographers. One of my many many favorites, but very near the top of the list. And I hereby grant you the rights back. I am always envious of your poems. Seems like if you had just waited a bit, I would have gotten around to writing them! Ha.
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p.s. – wonderful picture. did you take it?
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Yes. The face was incredible as well but felt due to the message that I needed to shield the identity. This woman in incredibly beautiful and a fashionplate. You might tell that from the jewelry. I took a half dozen or more photos of her on this day and they were all wonderful.
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Age doesn’t appear to have had any negative impact on your brain 🙂
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Ah, thanks, Jane. And between the alternatives, I choose brainpower.
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Me too 🙂
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Really nice poem … thanks! Cheers Jamie
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Good poem about aging and added fragility….
Also read mine….
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Thanks, Syedah. I love it when links are included in comments. Going to yours now!
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You are welcome and thank you so much for your positiveness 🙂
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Wow, I can certainly relate to this. My DNA is kicking in and I have all my parents’ troubles.
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Loved Loved LOVED this! Now that I’m on the other side of 50 I find myself thinking in these terms. 🙂
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I keep saying I have to snap out of it but hard to do when it is all fact instead of fiction!!!
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Nice!
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What a beautiful photograph, Judy. Thanks for posting.
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Heck yeah!
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Great poem and photo and alas very true 🙂
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Thanks, Liza.
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You don’t look old enough to have experienced this first hand, though.
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You have described me perfectly. On the other hand, consider the alternative. Even so, I do with I’d shrink evenly. Get thinner while getting shorter, as opposed to squatter.
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Lovely! Have to share!
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Thanks, Po’ Girl. The greatest compliment.
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lovely poem…. very inspiring….
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Thanks, Sudhir
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