
Black Reversal
Black as midnight. Black as coal.
Black as a remorseless soul.
Who dares face this shade of night?
This shade of death, color of fright.
Villains surround their back and nape
with a satin coal black cape.
Sirens slash their eyes with it,
then lower lids into a slit
to vanquish men and draw them in
to a life of sex and gin.
Shades of ebony and slate
do not grace the pearly gate.
Hear my warning. Hear it wellโ
black marks the entry gates to hell.
So turn your back to shades of night.
Save yourself. Turn on the light.
Black Jack, Black Sabbath, Black as sin?
These time-aged phrases have worn thin.
So do bigots fill our head
when we should realize instead
that black is not where evil starts.
There is no shade or hue to hearts.
Black is not the shade of sin,
and black is beautiful on skin!
For dVerse Poetics Shades of Black.
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An interesting perspective! I liked this line: Sirens slash their eyes with it,
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Black is beauty. ๐ ๐
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Fantastic poem and love the message. ๐๐๐
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Absolutely gorgeous! I love everything about this poem!
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Thanks..I expected some to get angry before they finished it.. but so far, safe.
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You spoke the truth!
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The rhythm of your poem reminds me of William Blake, Judy, as does the line โBlack as a remorseless soul. / Who dares face this shade of night?โ I love the Victorian melodrama Penny dreadful feel to the lines:
โSirens slash their eyes with it,
then lower lids into a slit
to vanquish men and draw them in
to a life of sex and gin.โ
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Our Calvinist past coming out, perhaps?
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Fabulous rhythm and rhyme here – never forced, moves it all along nicely.
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Thanks, Sarah
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You packed a lot of black into this .. and satin black skin is beautiful! Looks far better than our poxy white ๐
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Beautiful poem, Judy. I think any color of skin is beautiful, and Claude Monet claimed that nature had no pure black or pure white colors. There are shades of everything, and everything is mixed, including human emotions and attitude.
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Yes.
We all descended from the same “stuff.”
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Exactly
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Good advice: “So turn your back to shades of night.
Save yourself. Turn on the light.”
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Learned at an early age!
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The way we have used black for everything evil and bad certainly don’t apply to skin.
Great rhymes
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Expressly my thought.
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I love that last stanza. ALL lives matter. When will we ever learn!
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Such a good flow and rhythm, making it such an enjoyable and timeless read. I like your thoughtful reflection. Well penned! ๐
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Thanks, Anmol…
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