This being human is hard
when your blood
draws you to midnight,
throat stretched in a love song
torn from a wild soul.
Your wiry pelt,
raised by the moon’s gravitational pull,
sheds humanity’s cloak,
springs out from hiding,
and reveals its ruff.
The wildest creature for miles,
you lope for the forest,
then bound to the highest hill
to proclaim this night’s dominion
over a too-tame world.
For dVerse Poets. Image by JP Valery on unsplash, used with permission.
Right down my alley~! I have a recurring problem when a coon finally figures out that my Koi pond makes for a good eating place. When this happens they must go for a ride to the park along the river. Tami gets exited when I get out my “friendly live trap”. So last night after setting it, neither Tami nor Eppie (the cat) came in at the usual time. I went out to check on them and they were both standing there, watching that trap~! I guess they were waiting for the coon to arrive~!
You might enjoy this post I wrote a while back and just found it this morning in my notes… Not great, but I had fun putting it together. (you know me, I like a “play on words”.
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I had a pet raccoon from the time it was a tiny baby. It’s mother had been killed by hunters, so it was an animal rescue. Later, when it was HUGE–a few years old–we gradually returned it to nature. Then we had a family of raccoons that terrorized out house in the redwoods. I’ve told a few stories about their invasions of our house. Unbelievably canny creatures with great reasoning powers and memory.
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The call of the moon! Love it, Judy.
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We all feel it a bit, don’t we?
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An interesting “take” on the challenge. Well penned!
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Thanks, Beverly. It has had a few rewrites since posting. Why can I never see those word repetitions until long after posting?
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Stirring.
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My goodness this is absolutely stunning! I love; “Your wiry pelt, raised by the moon’s gravitational pull, sheds humanity’s cloak, springs out from hiding, and reveals its ruff.”💝💝
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So happy that you enjoyed it, Sanaa.
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Powerful image.
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Sounds like a werewolf tale! Reminds of all the horror classics I loved as a kid. I think some of us do carry a bit of feral nature in us. Just put me in a wilderness and see if I howl.
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Hi Eilene. This is actually my second werewolf poem. Sounds as though you might enjoy hearing the first as well: https://judydykstrabrown.com/2017/10/27/jnws-halloween-prompt-werewolf/
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Oh, that is really good and creepy, yet romantic. I had a crush on a boy in 6th grade and turned him into a werewolf in a couple little stories. He didn’t appreciate them! I actually found recently that I still have them – and you can tell he had crumpled them into wads.😆
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We need to see them., both the crumpled originals and the retyped version.
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Ha ha! Yes, that would be funny. They’re barely legible, written in faded pencil.
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But you could type them out.. the photo would just be for illustration. Love that they are all crumpled up by your boyfriend.
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Sometimes tameness is overrated. I like the spin you put on this Judy. Aoooooooooo!
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I knew there was a bit of the lupine in you, Lisa!
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:::tail wagging:::
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This is such a fantastic poem from start to finish! I love the first few lines.
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Thanks, Lucy!
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I love where you’ve gone with this poem, Judy! I’ve often wondered how a werewolf feels about its human side, whether it prefers to be a wolf or a human, whether it embraces its feral nature or rejects it. The pull of the moon is strong and the image of the ‘throat stretched in a love song / torn from a wild soul’ proclaiming the nights’ ‘dominion over a too-tame world’ is powerful.
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Thanks, Kim. I think the two sides are pretty independent of each other..perhaps even unknowing of anything except their own nature.
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Wow, this is a powerful perspective Judy. Our humaness is as wild as any animal, and perhaps more cunning and dangerous, owing to our strange aberration — the ability to think abstractly.
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I wonder if that was there originally in humans or if we developed it..Since we evolved from primates, I guess the second is true.
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So cool–a were poem!! The image is perfect, too! I like the The Moon Is Full and Waiting too (especially the final lines) but this one’s tone and shorter lines seem more appropriate to its subject–raw and feral!
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Thanks, Beatriz, for reading both and commenting.
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