Impressionable Dozer
The whole house is sleeping—the dogs and the cats
on the chair and the sofa and their cushy mats.
Even the air seems stilled in its rush.
I am calmed by its torpor and lulled by its hush.
Although there are labors I know I should do,
I survey my agenda and plan it anew.
It’s hot in my bedroom, but the sofa looks nice.
I go to the kitchen for water and ice.
Then I grab my computer and spread myself out.
With no one to disturb, as there’s no one about,
I may nod off myself before long, but I hope
that I’ll finish this first, but as you can see…..
Nope.
The dVerse Poets prompt today is to write a Quadrille on the topic of sleep. Ironically, just before looking up the prompt, I had just taken the above photos and was thinking of writing about exactly that topic. Thus, this poem that half-fills the bill. Not a quadrille, but I really did fall asleep before finishing it so I should get double points for succumbing that fully to the prompt..
Now, guess where I am headed?
Ha, thank you for a great post! Your dog and cat sure look super comfy 😊
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Every bit of this is the gospel truth…Synchronicity in motion.
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She’s growing!
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Still very puppyish though.
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Lots of cuteness in one set of photos and a short poem.
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So interesting. Usually I have to search for photos. These were the most recent ones taken!
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Adorable.
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So you scratch their ears,, and even down their back, snuggle them with a love attack, squeeze them in a soft warm hug, feeling them so nice and snug, then that big lug seems to say: ‘sorry no more for you ahead”, and jumps off the bed /
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So strange. I replied to this but none of my replies took. My WP was acting absolutely schizophrenic at the time. At any rate, yes, true, but luckily not always.
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Great bit of poetry Judy. Flowed wonderfully through the rhyme, excellent,
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Thanks, Rob. I really did fall asleep for just minutes as I wrote it, which prompted the ending.
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Clever take on the prompt. Nicely done poem.
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Not a quadrille, but one can’t always mind!!!
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Love it! You captured me today perfectly!
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Ah! The grace of peace and quiet. Enjoy! Your cats and Zoe…are so cute 😍
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They are…They make me happy every day.
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You are very blessed! Cheers
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Loved the scene you’ve created. Restful slumber.
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I hope you had a lovely nap amongst your sweet pets.
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A very short one.. and then when I headed to the hammock, a friend dropped by so we had a glass of wine and a very nice conversation instead. I’d been wanting to see her for a long time so it was very pleasant. It’s now nearly 11 PM and I still haven’t had my long nap but I’m no longer tired.
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Perfect setting to doze off for sure!
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It was so hot in the house and I never did make it to the hammock. I had fans on, though.
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Brilliant ending
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This really made me laugh out loud! You use the rhythm and rhyme so well, it flows so naturally – no grammar distortion here! – and then that ending! Fantastic.
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Thanks, Sarah. Sometimes a little dozing off can be a helpmate!
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hear, hear!
perhaps not a quadrille, but such a delight to read, Judy!
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I miss our weekly chats. Now that I’m back from my holiday I’ll have to make more of an effort to read my emails. Love how you used the prompts this week. Carol
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Thanks, Carol. I’d like to hear about your trip. Perhaps we could just set up a chat ourselves some time.
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That sounds like a good idea. Are you on WhatsApp?
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yes
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I love the way your poem ties in your sleepy animals with your snoozing off in the chair. That is what happened to me last night. I only got through two posts before I was gone! :>)
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I have been so sleepy lately, no matter how much sleep I get at night. I can’t figure out why.
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Are you depressed? That contributes to the need for more sleep??
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Love how you used the word in every sense – that hammock must be comfy!
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My favorite place and the view and company are great: garden and dogs.
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And sometimes my friend Brad who is an excellent hammock denizen.
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A fun-loving, lovingly flowing poem!
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