Foolish Pride
He folds his arms.
She seals her mind.
Their last contact
back-to-back.
Each sure the other
meant to wound,
pride seals their futures.
Sad ending remembered
for a lifetime.
For The Things Unsaid, 30 words or less
Painting by Ron Hicks
Nailed it. This impassible moment. It’s absolutely perfect.
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Thank you for sharing this. Beautiful.
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Sad times, nicely described!
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Perfect!
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Ouch
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Those first two lines are a great opening
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