Foggybaby Dreams Clarified
(For My Nephews––now Six Feet Tall.)
You flinched from my touch,
hated the red cowboy hats
I bought for you,
preferred the hundred
tiny grass frogs
to the cows we tried
to introduce
into your city lives,
had eyes only for the trucks
carrying salt for the cows
to gather after.
Early mornings,
you leaned against
my sleep.
And oh,
your sleep-wicked
hair
and your
sweet sour milkbreath
and the
slight fart smell
of your warm bunny p.j.’s,
your impeccable smiles.
Daylight
had barely
bedeviled
you yet.
Five minutes until
you melted
back into your
foggy baby dreams,
and I became
your
nostalgia.
For NaPoWriMo 2023, the first prompt is to write a poem inspired by a book cover.
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A beautiful poem
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Sadje, you always amaze me. You had viewed my poem seconds after I posted it. We must be on the same time schedule. Thanks for always commenting. It is a lovely validation.
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Yes, sometimes it works that way. And the reader makes it easy by presenting the latest , first. It’s always a pleasure my friend
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NICE~!
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This made me think of my daughter as a baby. She’s only five now but those days of “sleep-wicked hair and sweet sour milkbreath” already seem like a long ago dream sometimes. Thank you for sharing. This was lovely.
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I’m so glad it struck a chord. My sister’s children were the only babies in our family so they drew a lot of attention when they came to visit. I was baby-crazy, always, but ironically never had any of my own. My husband’s youngest children were still little when we married, however, so I got a good bit of mothering in.
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Absolutely nothing escapes you and everything you share!! Love it all!!!
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Thanks, Perry. It is a pleasure to share it with you.
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“Sleep wicked hair” — gorgeous image.
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Ha.. I had some of that myself this morning.
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I always do…
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I have a sense of how this moment is so different for the baby and the grown-up… but for both, maybe nostalgia.
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Exactly, Björn!!!!
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Enjoyed your take on foggy baby dreams, Judy…full of sensory memories!
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