Cheap Thrills
Stand by the door of the room with your coat still on.
Try to stay melted while he unbuttons his shirt.
He could turn you on his fingers like a carousel
hot
Try to imagine you turning him.
Try to catch hold of him.
Relax everything–
different parts of you
like clothes in a pile on the floor.
You’ll get wrinkled falling down so often
under the tornado
which has dropped him
back again
flat on you, as you melt into the bed
above his favorite spot.
He has been
wherever everyone goes
You may have crossed the equator,
traveling
all around the world and back
for things
but you have never ever
come back with the kind of prizes you can hang
on dressing table mirrors.
Your exquisite things of the world
live with you,
but you have never been
where they all go
though you have tried
and tried
and sometimes you have
nearly made it
yet,
cheap thrills, in the end,
have always evaded you.
In your deepest voice,
you want to
“Hey baby, want a few cheap thrills?”
and you want him to
sink you down
you want to almost drown
call help so he comes after you
and you rise up
together
for the splitting of an
atom gone
til you
come
back
fall down together.
It would be a miracle.
imagine.
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a glorious Palinode of such hot passions (“He could turn you on his fingers like a carousel”) which brilliantly and subtly u-turns as the poem continues – loved this!
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Thanks, Laura.
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I got lost reading this.😅 I especially love the line “Try to stay melted while he unbuttons his shirt”
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Thanks, Melissa. I guess the point is trying to stay lost!!!
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O….M….G….~!!!
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Just the response I was looking for! ;o)
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To break out from such a spell is what we all want… but in the end it’s futile…
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Stunning write, Judy! Sensual and yearning, the imagery absolutely immersive.
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Terrific and so well crafted.
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Titillating stream of consciousness that, like Melissa said, you get lost in. Ooh la la!
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