Long Before, for Forgottenman’s Poetry Prompt, June 22, 2025

 

Long Before

Long before our years began,
before the mind of nature had conjured man,
the artists of the universe,
(artists that they were)
that started it all,
started imagining a combination of science and art,
imagining its form and actions and its thoughts.
Its beginning a particular straying of atoms,
beginning that parade
that at its tail end––
at its possible tale’s end––
its greatest creation or its
greatest, perhaps, mistake.
Perhaps that last thing that ended its own being,
that humanity-declared champion of creation:
Humanity.

(Would that we had lived up to our name.)

 

Please go HERE to read ForgottenMan’s poem that introduced the prompt.

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My blog, which started out to be about overcoming grief, quickly grew into a blog about celebrating life. I post daily: poems, photographs, essays or stories. I've lived in countries all around the globe but have finally come to rest in Mexico, where I've lived since 2001. My books may be found on Amazon in Kindle and print format, my art in local Ajijic galleries. Hope to see you at my blog.

4 thoughts on “Long Before, for Forgottenman’s Poetry Prompt, June 22, 2025

  1. okcForgottenMan's avatarokcForgottenMan

    Love this poem!

    Thanks for writing to and propagating my prompt, Remi! It’s gotten me a few views today already!

    As an aside: I’m called Dux in some corners of my life. I’m thinking about naming my new scheme the “Dux Vainglory Construct”. Any other suggestions/comments?

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