My sister Patti and I, posed by my older sister Betty. Those are “the” cherry trees behind us. The fact that we were wearing dresses suggests we were just home from Sunday school and church, our souls bleached as white as our shoes and socks!
I used to eat red
from backyard cherry trees,
weave yellow dandelions
into cowgirl ropes
to lariat my Cheyenne uncle.
I once watched dull writhing gold
snatched from a haystack by its tail,
held by a work boot
and stilled by the pitchfork of my dad
who cut me rattles while I didn’t watch.
I felt white muslin bleached into my soul
on Sunday mornings in a hard rear pew,
God in my pinafore pocket
with a picture of Jesus
won from memorizing psalms.
But it was black I heard at midnight from my upstairs window––
the low of cattle from the stock pens
on the other side of town––
the long and lonely whine of diesels on the road
to the furthest countries of my mind.
Where I would walk
burnt sienna pathways
to hear green birds sing a jungle song,
gray gulls call an ocean song,
peacocks cry the moon
until I woke to shade-sliced yellow,
mourning doves still crooning midnight songs of Persia
as I heard morning
whistled from a meadowlark
half a block away.
And then,
my white soul in my shorts pocket,
plunging down the stairs to my backyard,
I used to eat red,
pick dandelions yellow.
The dVerse Poets prompt is to use color as a motif in your poem. To see more poems written to this prompt, go HERE.
Oh, Judy! This is so lovely!
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Thanks, Lou. It’s one of my favorites so glad you like it, too. Hard to beat nostalgia..especially in today’s world.
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the best, judy! can see, hear, feel and smell this beautiful poem! ❤ xx, ren
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Thanks, Ren. I can actually smell those roses and taste the cherries as I read this poem..I loved that house and yard.
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the love shows ❤
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This is such an evocative poem, Judy. Thank you for sharing your colourful childhood so vividly.
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Thanks, Kim. It was such a simple environment that what memories I do have stand out vividly.
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The colours of childhood memories
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Thanks, Derrick. Have you writtten about your childhood?
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Quite a lot
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On your blog? If so, can you give me some links?
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This is a good starter, Judy: https://derrickjknight.com/2021/03/14/about-a-boy/ The pictures disappeared from this when I took my management from WP, but a lot of other posts are underlined in the text.
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Thanks, Derrick. I enjoyed them greatly and left a comment at the end I hope you can see.
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Thank you very much, Judy
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such a colourful childhood but the black so close to the imagist ideal – sensational
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Thanks, Laura. I was always a night owl so was sent to bed hours before I fell asleep or my older sisters were sent upstairs to bed, so I have very clear memories of the night sounds.
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Love all those colors…. sounds wonderful
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Thanks, Björn.
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nostalgia done right!
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Thanks, Tina.
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Love this colorful and vivid poem Judy!
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Thanks, Tiffany, for sharing my memories with me.
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I love your poem of great memories. The photo is perfect! The mix of colors works so well together. I remember those cards and tickets with verses on them from Sunday School. Memorization was the name of the game back then. The vision of your white souls is great!
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There was little to tempt us back then. Church, Sunday School and MYF were the biggest social events of the week in that small, remote town.
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MYF that was what we had as well. So interesting.
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Monday nights. And Summer camp in the Black Hills
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:>)
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Oh, this is like an old (color!) slide show or bright scrapbook…thanks for sharing your childhood memories in such an endearing way with words!
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Thanks, Lynn, for your generous summary.
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So poignant Judy
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Thanks, Sadje. It is a pleasure to share my memories with you.
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You’re most welcome. I do enjoy your writing and the forays to your early life. ♥️♥️♥️
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I really like the title/first line. It’s evocative.
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I wonderful telling, Judy. I especially enjoyed stanzas four and five!
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Thanks, Jennifer.. they still stand out so clearly in my memory.
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what beautiful and heady memories which wonderfully add meaning to your lovely photograph – Jae
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A tour de force of the colours of your childhood, Judy, and I love the way you circle round at the end…
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I love this, reveling in the particlar colors of childhood like picking off the petals of a blossom. And the hard-tack Kansas of it, finding Oz at home.
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How beautifully expressed, Brendan.
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This is just so beautiful, Judy. To have been brought up in a small town (i’m assuming here, forgive me if I’m wrong) but I love small towns. And I’m a big cry baby with memories like these. All so beautiful. The white and black contrast is stunning here. Thanks for sharing. Bless you.
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My town was 700 people. Now down to 464 in the 2024 census. Thanks for your generous comments, Selma.
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“until I woke to shade-sliced yellow,
mourning doves still crooning midnight songs of Persia“
Love this, Judy!
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Thanks, Sara.
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Such a good poem, Judy. Hoping you put it in your keeper folder.
It’s too bad farmers kill snakes, as they do a great job of keeping the rodent populations down.
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Yes but this one was going into a haystack which meant it could have either gotten one of the cows or my dad himself, when he removed hay for the cattle.
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Will do, Lisa..
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