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You
We could share a lifetime in some connected place
and I would never lose my awe of your familiar face.
Years relaxing into it will seem a weekend trip:
mere hours to memorize your mouth––that classic upper lip.
Then when at last we’re in our home, I’ll have the whole of you
emblazoned in my memory with nothing left to do
but to enjoy the “all” of you, not just your face and form––
that heart and soul and seed of you that creates your corm.
For The Sunday Whirl the prompt words are: lifetime share relax connect place last class awe home will years trip. (A corm is a short, thickened underground plant stem that stores starches and nutrients to fuel the plant’s growth.)

Is that your husband. Judy? That’s lovely & he’s handsome❣️
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No… just a creation in collaboration with AI
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This is lovely Judy.
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Thanks, Diane.
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This is actively expressive, it is beautifully written
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Thanks, Ellen.
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A beautiful tender poem. Excellent use of the words
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Here’s mine. I cannot submit this poem to the site
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Thanks for sending your poem and the song. I answered on your blog!
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Soulmates, simply beautiful.
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Thanks, Keith. I have luckily had three soulmates in my life. More than my share. (One at a time.)
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A beautiful tribute Judy ❤️
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Thanks, Ange.
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Nicely done Judy
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Thanks, Sadie…
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Most welcome dear friend
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