The prompt: Tell us about what happened the last time you were up early (or late…).
On Skype (After Midnight and 3 Margaritas)
She: maybe I need to take Frida (the Akita) to the snore doctor.
She: Perhaps she has sleep apnea. She sounds like a lion when she sleeps.
She: Have you ever heard her snore?
He: Yep.
She: Do you miss it?
He: Miss your zzzz’s
She: You miss my snores? Sweet.
She: I miss snoring for you.
He: That’s the first line of a poem.
She: I’ll write a poem starting with “I miss snoring for you,” if you will, too.
He.: I’ll try to remember to do so tomorrow.
She:
You Say You Miss My Snores
I miss snoring for you,
stepping on your shoe
when we don’t dance,
miss that glance
from your alternate self
you keep on a shelf
when you aren’t with me.
How can it be
that both of us choose
to leave our clues
in cyberspace
not face-to-face?
Alone together
with no tether,
our way
for today
perhaps forever
internetedly clever.
He: it just blows me away how you can come up with something like that, so achingly beautiful, in less than five minutes!
She: Ah. You inspire it.
He: I muse you whilst i amuse you
She: Ha. That is exactly it!
She: What you just said couldn’t have been said more succinctly or more briefly. It is the tweet
of poetry
She: sweet tweet of poetry—sweet bird of absurd
(After this, the conversation digressed. No more shall be said.)
Update: “He” has written his version, as agreed. You can see it here.
Sounds like a song lyric. Put it to the tune of “Lydia, the Tattoo Lady”. You’ll have a number one hit!
Love you. Can
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Have to check that one out…
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You’re both fun as poets. 🙂
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You both handled the opening line challenge quite well. It takes inspiration to say so much with so few words. Thank you for being you and for sharing it with the world.
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Thank you, Tim, especially for wandering over to read my response.
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Thanks Tim, It is fun when people comment on old posts and I get to go back and read things I’d forgotten. This was a fun exchange. I appreciate your commenting.
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