How Come the Thumb?
Yum.
Your thumb
looks so delicious I can almost taste it.
And I can see that you’re not going to waste it.
But, after you have had a few more sips from it,
do you suppose you could remove your tongue and lips from it
so I can see your face
without the thumb in place?
No?
I thought so.
Well, that’s okay. I’m used to seeing little kids with gums
around their thumbs.
In fact, I’ve never seen a little kid from North or South
Who could keep a thumb as good as yours out of his mouth.
Thumbs need comfort too, I realize.
And a mouth’s the perfect size
for a thumb to hide
inside.
In fact, a tongue
is strung
just right for chewing it,
so I’m not blaming you for doing it.
Bigger kids have learned how not to suck their thumbs like that.
But you’re too young for that.
Anyway, I think your thumb is great. I wouldn’t want to knock it.
I just thought, perhaps, you’d like to store it in your pocket
for awhile. Of course, in there it’s sure to get fuzz stuck on it,
which might affect your further plans to suck on it.
So, you would have to find things for your mouth to do
while there’s no thumb in you.
For instance, maybe you could hum
or chew some gum
and blow a bubble big enough to stretch from here to here
(from ear to ear.)
Or, if you could learn to purse your lips,
we could rehearse your lips
to teach them how to whistle the same song
all day long.
Which is guaranteed to irritate your dad and mum
as least as much as sucking thumb.
I’ve got to tell you, though, you can’t get any songs or gum in
with that thumb in.
So, why not jerk that thumb from in between your lips?
You’ll free your mouth for sips,
for lollipops and jawbreakers.
Why not just let your thumbs be paw shakers?
Develop a grip. Shake hands with friends.
They’ll love your handshakes with no soggy fingers at the ends.
Now I don’t want for you to take this wrong.
You wouldn’t have to take it out for long.
But if you’d pull that thumb out for a while,
Just long enough to show your smile,
I’d love to see your face for once with nothing in it.
Of course that’s hard for little kids––Hey, wait a minute.
Just what are those
two pink things there beneath your nose?
Are those your lips without a thumb in them?
And filled with just the teeth that come in them?
Is that your thumb so dry and pink?
I think
it’s feeling better out in open space
than it has ever felt there in your face.
You must have had that mouth with not a finger in it
for at least a minute.
And you are looking very debonair
without those fingers waving in the air.
In fact, since you have ceased to suckle
on your knuckle,
you’re acting so much bolder,
that you are looking older.
So, now my only question is, how come
you never thought before to give up chewing thumb?
For dVerse Poets Pub. Somehow, these two Kafka quotes below wound up leading to the children’s book/verse above:
“I usually solve problems by letting them devour me.” from Letters to Friends, Family, and Editors
“Beyond a certain point there is no return. This point has to be reached.” from The Trial

Have you illustrated this yet for a book?
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Nope.. Two more to come first.
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Good to hear — I hope this will be the 3rd!
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it will be the fifth as two have already been published. But then who is counting?
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Yay — I was just thinking of the three not yet published! I love Sunup/Sundown!
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There I go underestimating you, Janet.
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Not really — I still don’t know the title of the 5th one (or is it the 1st one?!)!
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I’m working on “I Really Want a Puppy” and “Fish Feet.” Puppy is being illustrated and has a song to go with it. Fishfeet is not illustrated and we are working on the song. The fifth will either be ‘Knees” or “How Come the Thumb.”
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excellent one.
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I was an ardent thumb sucker. It was not considered a good thing for a girl to do.
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I can’t ever remember sucking my thumb, but as I type this I suddenly have a flash of a very wrinkled soggy one so perhaps it triggered a memory. I was a nail biter.
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I love your poem and the sweet picture you created.
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Such thumb fun, Judy! I will save this for my grandson, who sucks his thumb only when he’s tired. I love the list of all the things the child could do without the thumb in its mouth, and the lines:
‘And you are looking very debonair
without those fingers waving in the air.
In fact, since you have ceased to suckle
on your knuckle,
you’re acting so much bolder,
that you are looking older.’
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That’s the best that could be hoped for…that a kid would hear and enjoy it
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move over Dr Suess .. well worth publishing, love it but I wont suck it … my thumb that is 🙂
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Thanks, Kate.
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Very nice use of meter and rhyme. Here is one line I particularly liked: “I’d love to see your face for once with nothing in it.”
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As someone whose child
sucked their thumb til they were 10
I wish I’d had this poem at the time
to read to them!
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Perhaps your grandchildren??
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I’m traveling at the moment but cannot wait to get home and read this to my two little thumb suckers! Maybe, just maybe, your story will be the catalyst for kicking my three year olds favorite pastime. She’ll be like, “You had me at lollipop.”
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Impressive diplomacy convincingly written to appeal to any young thumb sucker!
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Ha… love the reasoning logic behind this… I was not much of thumbsucker myself, but my sister was… don’t think it would have helped…
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I can see how the 2 quotes lead to the poem. I like it. 🙂
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