
Meat Market Surprise
Her low-cut dress clearly bespoke
her dire need to meet a bloke.
When she removed her swathing cloak,
a dozen men at once awoke
from barroom reveries to choke
on swallows of their Rum and Coke
or beer or whisky. “Okeedoke!”
their eyes said, as they shared the joke.
Which one would have the night’s best poke?
One chugged his drink, as if to stoke
his courage. One more took a toke.
They circled round, craving the yoke
of one night’s spree–perhaps a soak
in penthouse hot tub most Baroque?
Then, as though wishes could invoke
more luck, a mini-skirt and toque-
clad example of fine womanfolk
appeared , more passions to provoke—
another goddess made to evoke
a duel, heart attack or stroke!
But then, alas, their bubbles broke
as she sauntered up and pulled an oak
stool to the bar and spoke.
Her voice was sultry—fire and smoke—
as she killed their dreams in one fell stroke.
“Darling,” she said to the other miss,
enfolding her in an ardent kiss.
For #SOCS: Meat (This is a reblog of a 2019 poem, but since all of my writing is stream of consciousness, I figure it meets the prompt.)
Quite brilliant
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OOOOH~! looks like something I would scribble about 3 in the morning and then wish that I had not posted it~! BUT I LIKE IT~!
SAM
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🙂 That is good and unexpected.
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Oops
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What a fun read!
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Well done, Judy. You are the Queen of Last Lines.
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This poem is funny, but no joke. Of a happy poke, there’s more than one heart-broken bloke.
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Bravo! Wonderful story and surprise ending, wrapped up in a rhyming poem that I couldn’t ignore.
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Your humor and knack for rhyming mark this one as great fun. Pretty sexy photo too.
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Taken in La Manzanilla…at the beach. One night on the street outside a local bar. Some festival was going on. Perhaps rodeo.
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