The Prompt: Delayed Contact—How would you get along with your sibling(s), parent(s), or any other person you’ve known for a long time — if you only met them for the first time today?
If I had met my parents when we all were sixty-seven,
(before she went on oxygen, before he went to heaven,)
would we have liked each other and found something to say?
As strangers, would we walk on by or pass the time of day?
My father liked to be the one spinning out the tale.
Beside his vivid stories, I think most of mine would pale.
He wasn’t a joke-teller or a purveyor of fictions.
It was true stories of his life that fueled his depictions.
And when his friends had heard them all, he’d tell them all again.
Though they stretched with every telling, still his tales never grew thin.
If fifteen wolves pursued him—a number that is plenty,
the next time that he told the tale, I’ll wager there’d be twenty!
When I returned from Africa with stories of my own,
I found that they weren’t good enough, for all of them had grown
with all my dad’s retellings, so the rhino I had snapped
a photo of, now chased me. (In reality, it napped.)
I think perhaps my mother would like my poems the best.
She’d like the rhyme and meter, the humor and the jest.
For I learned all of it from her when I was very small,
as she was doing rhyming before I learned to crawl.
I grew up with her diaries—all of them in rhyme.
She had them in a notebook and we read them all the time.
The tales of her friend Gussie, who wasn’t allowed beaus;
so they said they went to Bible study, though it was a pose.
Gussie’s mother baked two pies, (for coffee hour, they said.)
Her father said he’d pick them up. They said they’d walk instead.
They took one of her mother’s pies to those within the church,
then took the other with them as they left them in the lurch!
Their beaus were waiting for them in a car with motor running.
Instead of Bible reading, they preferred to do some funning.
To abscond with both the pies was something that they had debated,
but in the end they left one pie–an action that they hated.
Two sisters present were their foes. They were so prim and proper.
To steal one pie was lie enough—but two would be a whopper!
Mom’s entry in her journal is one I can still tell.
(Don’t know why it’s the only one that I remember well.)
Line for line, here’s what she said in metered verse and rhyme,
though it’s been sixty years since I heard it for the first time:
“We left that crowd of greedy Dirks to feast upon our pies.
We were so mad, like Gussie’s Dad—had pitchforks in our eyes!”
My mother burned this journal when I was just a kid.
I wish she hadn’t done so, but alas, it’s true, she did.
Perhaps she didn’t want to see us following her ways.
Instead of what she did, better to follow what she says.
But I am sure if she still lived we’d have a little fun,
sitting down together when every day was done
and writing all our exploits down, relaying all our slips—
saving for posterity the words that pass our lips.
And in the meantime, Dad would tell as long as he was able,
all those stories that he’s told at table after table.
In coffee shops and golf courses, at parties or a dance,
he would go on telling them, whenever there’s a chance.
And if we all were strangers, and none of us were kids,
we could relate our stories without putting on the skids.
Each would outdo the other as we passed around the bend,
with story after story till we all came to The End!!!
You have quite a talent for rhyme!
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Thanks, Lew-Ellyn. I am perhaps “caught” in rhyme and need to escape for awhile…Judy
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i do like the point of view, Judy, and the stylish delivery.
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Thanks, John.
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wonderfully composed.. 🙂
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It was so much fun reading your response to the prompt…well written and rhymed 🙂
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Thanks, Sweety….Judy
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Your family is a beautiful story. Do you get the writing prompt the day you post it? If so, you must have all the arrows already in your quiver.
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Yes… I receive it each morning when I wake up and write to it..Unless I’ve already written to the same prompt. Then if pressed for time I sometimes give a link to an earlier writing or post something previously written, noting it as such. Not often, though. This I wrote on the day I received the prompt.
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Is it on the reader in the morning? That’s pretty amazing that you could write something so good so fast!
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No.. It’s on the WordPress Daily Prompt.
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No, it is on the WordPress Daily Prompt. https://dailypost.wordpress.com/prompts/
Hit on the day’s prompt. Today it was Embarrassed, but ironically enough, the pingbacks didn’t work so there is no grid showing everyone who posted. Go back one day and it will give you links to everyone else who wrote on the topic. You need to make a pingback to their URL on your post and then your link will go up on that page and everyone can read you.
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I have been doing this every morning for two years now, I think… or perhaps for 14 months. I keep forgetting and having to check back. It gets addictive. I could probably be using the time to write something more productive, but not more fun. I love having immediate feedback and comments and reading other blogs such as yours. Might as well invest in fun as in fame and fortune.
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I agree. It can be tedious, but also energizing. Did you self publish
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When I saw Billy last week, he told me one of Ben’s Georgie Skinner stories. It cracked me up!
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Was it the “That was a big job.” story? If not, give a hint.
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