The Prompt: Fourth Wall—You get to spend a day inside your favorite movie. Tell us which one it is — and what happens to you while you’re there.
That bouquet of sharpened pencils? They had me from the start.
Who knew that Mr. Hanks had that effect upon my heart?
I know it was the writers. I’m a writer. I’m not dim!
And it was just a role he played—it really wasn’t him!
Nor was it his main character that penned those words so fine.
It was his alter ego that he only used on-line!
Suspending disbelief is what we writers count upon.
In another lingo, we might call it a fine con.
We take our readers from themselves into a new dimension,
where we create a world that’s purely of our own invention;
and there we spin a fantasy that catches them within it—
offering a prize so rare that readers want to win it.
And films use music, too, to try to capture our emotions,
wiping out our common sense and filling us with notions.
The track to “You’ve Got Mail” was as romantic as could be!
If little birds fly oe’r the rainbow, why, indeed, can’t we?
We all identified and put ourselves into the tale,
and when it ended happily, we all read, “You’ve Got Male!”

Very good movie one of my mothers favorites!
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Now that makes me feel old!!! Ha. If you haven’t seen it, you should….Judy
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Wonderful poem.
That movie I know, umm …
Which movie would I give
As the place that I’d live?
Raiders of the Lost Ark?
What if those snakes hit their mark?
Singin’ in the Rain?
I’d be happy, again,
But I’d have to examine – ahh
My real tap dancing stamina
Pride and Prejudice, perhaps.
(Note how my rhyme skills can lapse.)
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Love Pride. . ., Sense. . . and all the rest…but going corsetless is best!
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Clever!
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I will check my email from you shortly – LOL – This movie is about Two business rivals hate each other at the office but fall in love over the internet. ”You’ve Got Mail” deserves to trigger a revived interest in the late honey-voiced singer Harry Nilsson, whose music on the lighthearted soundtrack provides just the right mix of jauntiness and yearning. Mr. Nilsson’s beautiful music hasn’t figured this prominently in a film since it turned up in ”Midnight Cowboy,” used to quite different effect.
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Have you seen it? Beats Sleepless in Seattle, When Harry Met Sally
and any other tales of thwarted and found romance. Best romantic ending ever. If you haven’t seen it, you are in for a treat…Judy
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Yes I have seen twice, thank you for your recommendation. I love Seattle Washington, misty rain, multi cultural. We have a concert within few weeks!
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You’ve Got Mail…. a lovely look at life and destiny! One of my favorites ..
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Never noticed the pencils. Now I will have to look. I’m a fan of the movie (along with When Harry Met Sally and Sleepless in Seattle), and now I’m a fan of your poem as well! Great job! Ever so clever. 🙂
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I enjoyed all three but You’ve Got Mail was waaaay out there in front!
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