A Walk up the Mountain With My Dogs During Wildflower Season, Oct 3, 2021

20 Replies

 

Pulled by my dogs, I ventured off the gravel road onto the tire tracks that forged a path up the mountain.  Lifting the hatch to a metal gate that granted access to the sloping meadows behind the high fence that otherwise would impede our progress, we ventured off the tire tracks onto a path worn only by previous feet. The heavy rains this year had created wildflowers so high that they formed an arch over our heads, belying the fact that the rains, long over, have left the hills so dry, so dense the underbrush, that where I pushed my way the giant hush was changed to soft explosion. The dogs, however, venturing farther into the great banks of flowers, found greener grass that they grazed upon like sheep, impeding my progress as I gave into their needs and let them determine our pace.

for dVerse Poets, we were to write a prosery piece of just 144 words, ithat included the line of poetry from a poem by Yver Winters that I have put in italics.

Below is a video I took during that walk!           

     HERE  is the dVerse prompt and the entire poem by Yver Winters.

20 thoughts on “A Walk up the Mountain With My Dogs During Wildflower Season, Oct 3, 2021”

  4. isaiah46ministries's avatarisaiah46ministries

    Wow, Judy! What tall grasses and flowers. It was you were in a cave. How exciting for you and the dogs! I appreciated the video, because I couldn’t have imagined how high the flowers were.

    Like

    Reply ↓
  6. kim881's avatarkim881

    That’s a great title, Judy, and I enjoyed accompanying you and your dogs on this meadow and mountain walk. I love the thought of ‘wildflowers so high that they formed an arch over our heads’.

    Like

    Reply ↓
  9. sanaarizvi's avatarsanaarizvi

    This felt so natural that I had to read the prose twice before I realised how seamlessly the line fitted right in! Bravo! ❤️❤️❤️

    Like

    Reply ↓

Leave a comment