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NaPoWriMo, Day 10: Neo Burma-Shave Ads

Our prompt today was to write a poem advertising poetry.  The third one is not quite an ad, but it has the cadence.

Neo Burma-Shave Ads

Make your words
both scan and rhyme.
Writing poetry’s
not a crime!

Get a seed of thought
and sow it.
Once it grows,
you’ll be a poet!

Robert Frost at the Movies

Robert’s poems
scanned and rhymed.
His meter? Even
and well-timed.

Yet when he tripped
on slippery tile
and dropped his
poems in a pile,

the usher hissed
in tones most vile
to get his “feet”
out of the aisle!

NaPoWriMo Day 7: Fidelity

Our prompt today was to write a love poem.

Fidelity

Each morning when I wake
to shrill alarm or sweet bird song,
depending upon the requirements of my day,
you are the first to greet my opening eyes.
You rest there on the pillow next to me
in the bed where first I, then you,
have fallen to sleep the night before
too soon, too soon,
before half our words were said.

After a quick trip to the john,
it is the first stroke of my fingers
that bring you finally to life.
Your countenance lights up
and the same love words
I revealed to you last night
are returned to me.

My hands caress
and new words come easily
first to me, then to you.
I touch gently all
your fine smoothness,
getting back
everything that I give
equal measure,
continuing our long love story
of give and take
as I shift your light frame onto my lap
to stroke your separate parts
from question mark to exclamation point.

Could a PC ever rouse this passion in me?
No way, MacBook Air. Thou art my love!

(I forgot to mention before that this love poem was to be written to an inanimate object. My love affair with Macs has extended over 30 years—from my very first floppy disk table model to my new love…the ultralight MacBook air.)

Lake Chapala Writers’ Conference

Just home from the cocktail party where I met Lawrence Hill and Claudia Long.  So nice to meet another locationally dyslexic face blind writer….(Claudia.)

What Do You See? (Please Comment)

Please help me name this newest retablo, just finished today. (Think of a retablo as a box containing a story.) What story do you see?

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(Click on this second smaller image to increase size of picture. You should then be able to Zoom in and use your scroll bar to see different parts of the image close up. Use + and – to zoom in and out.)

The Dogs Are Barking (May 19,2013)

The Dogs Are Barking

They break the morning––a daily rite.
It’s just a warning. The dogs won’t bite.
Two strangers talk but pass unseen.
I doze, they walk, with a wall between.
I lie here posed between thought and sleep.
My eyes still closed. I’m swimming deep.

I resist the trip––that journey up––
preferring to sip from the dreaming cup
whose liquid darker and bitter thick
reveals a starker bailiwick
than schedules, crafts, menus, schemes.
Much finer draughts we quaff in dreams.

I try to sink back into sleep,
once more to drink of waters deep;
but the dogs still bark. They leap and pace.
My dreams too dark for this morning place.
Those dreams lie deep and intertwined,
wanting to creep back up my mind.

But its slippery slope is much inclined
and provides small hope that I will find
again, that world well out of sight
where truth lies curled, still holding tight––
as oysters cleave and then unfurl
with mighty heave, the priceless pearl

of that other mind that slips the knife
beneath the rind of our daily life.
Time is a brew of present, past
and future, too—whatever’s cast
to stew and steep the story rare
that’s buried deep in dreams laid bare.

Dreams are stories we tell ourselves
that draw our quarries to bookstore shelves.
Pinned to the page, they reach their height
and bring our sage self to the light.
But the dogs are barking. They’re hungry, cross.
When I rise to feed them, the poem is lost.

Uncaught, dismembered, it blows away.
Like petals, scattered in the light of day.

The Leaf Never Falls . . .

. . . very far from the tree.

My sister sent me this message and poem that my mom wrote for her egads–over 50 years ago!

Hi there–
I was looking in a box of letters & memorabilia (including my Salutatorian speech from high school, of all things) that Mother gave me years ago, and I found this poem she wrote for me on my birthday one year. It’s so great I have to share it.

A POEM

I’ve used my best china,
Which I’ll wash–I bet.
I made you a cake
Which you already “et”

I’ve washed your clothes
And made your bed,
But please let this all
Not go to your head

Today is your birthday
But tomorrow is not,
So you’ll do your own jobs
You little–darling girl.

P.S.
In regards to your room,
I had meant to do more,
But I took one look
And made for the door.

She was so clever; I wonder if I appreciated it then?

xxoo Patti

Ghosts

Ghosts

It floated off to the side,
disappearing when I turned to face it head-on.
It hadn’t his features, really,
but I felt his presence a dozen times after—
something floating just off the corner of reality.

Then, weeks later, in the bedroom—a bat.
It flickered against the white curtain and then disappeared.
Moments later, there it was again.
I jerked my head quickly around, flipped the curtain out,
examined its other side.
Moments later, there it was again.
Then a circle floated across to join it.
A hair floated down from above and stuck, center-vision.

A few hours later, the fireworks started—
flashing corollas of light just to the right of me,
like subtle flashbulbs going off.

This was when I decided I needed to see a specialist.
Yes, a retinal detachment, he agreed,
but not yet perforated.
Now, my movements curtailed,
I await that new cloudy ghost
that will be a harbinger
of surgery.

Every tope, every cobblestone
brings a new flash of light—
a signal to still myself.
No jumping. No Zumba.
No jogging. No lifting.

I wait, inactive, watching floaters
move to the center of my vision
and off to the side again.
I practice various levels of exertion,
waiting for the flash that signals rest.

I wait for words to float
across my vision,
to rend my inactivity
and prompt me
to pin them to the page––
to stitch them together
into a clearer sight
of what is there, invisible,
inside me, waiting for the tear
to let it out.
They are the ghosts
of the future
and I am the one
who seeks to gather them,
to mend the tear
and anchor
these slippery ghosts.

As we sat in the waiting room waiting (of course) for my eyes to fully dilate so the dr could do his tests, Gloria asked what the red dot was on my blouse. I hadn't noticed it, but the nurse said, "Oh we put that on her to show she'd been dilated!"  Two hours later, I was still waiting for the dot to turn green so I'd know my eyes had returned to normal!!!!

As we sat in the waiting room waiting (of course) for my eyes to fully dilate so the dr could do his tests, Gloria asked what the red dot was on my blouse. I hadn’t noticed it, but the nurse said, “Oh we put that on her to show she’d been dilated!” Two hours later, I was still waiting for the dot to turn green so I’d know my eyes had returned to normal!!!!

Red Dot Syndrome

Red Dot Syndrome

Artist's rendering of my retinal disfunction.

Artist’s rendering of my retinal disfunction.

Gloria, contemplating my fate.

Gloria, contemplating my fate.

Retina specialist humor.

Retina specialist humor.

An undashing pirate wench

An undashing pirate wench

My reward!!! Gloria got to share.

My reward!!! Gloria got to share.

Lassitude, Guilty Pleasures, Solitude and TV in the afternoon!

Am I weak?  Undisciplined?  The minute the NaPoWriMo whip was removed, I sank into lassitude and solitude again and haven’t posted on this blog.  The truth is that I’m absolutely exhausted, both physically and mentally.  The blade of “the book” has been hanging over me for so long that I think now that it is removed that I crave actual retirement for a few days or weeks or months.  Of course, this isn’t possible.  Tony and I are giving a talk about the book tomorrow and have another talk scheduled in June. I have 4 more rhymed children’s books I need to find an illustrator for and I need to promote the “Grief Lessons” book. (If you have any ideas, please share them.)  I have another book I want to get on Kindle and Amazon and although that should be easy as it is already in print, it means combing old computers to find the Word file and actually meeting with Tony to figure out the process by which he put Grief Diary on Amazon.  It takes a very little effort, but I feel laaaaaaazy and have people coming for Mexican Train and pizza tonight and need to get in gear for that soon.  So, I’m going to shirk life’s responsibilities for another few hours and watch episode 13 of “The Americans” and pretend for a few more hours that I am really retired.  Please don’t give up on me.  I like connecting with you all in this way—both those I know and those I will know.  I enjoy seeing who has linked and some day I’ll figure out how to link with you or follow you.  In addition, I will figure out whether those are one and the same thing.  New to blogging, not new to life!

Question of the day:  Did anyone else out there ever make Maybaskets and fill them with candy and leave them on friends’ doorsteps on May 1?  You’d ring the doorbell and run.  If they caught you,Imagethey could pinch you or kiss you.   Pictured is a maybasket I made from shredded Kozo paper.  The flower is made from cardboard egg cartons cut up, glued and painted.  The candy was yummy.  I know because I couldn’t deliver this one on May 1 and ended up eating all the candy and had to go candy shopping again yesterday, when I gave this to my friend.  More secrets revealed!!  oxoxox Judy

A Whitman Sampler (Day 26 of NaPoWriMo)

WhitmanSamplerThe prompt for today was to select a very long poem and to distill words from it to create another poem. I chose Song of Myself by Walt Whitman.

Borrowed Song

Houses and rooms full of shelves
are crowded with myself
and know it and like it.

Undisguised and naked, I am mad for the smoke of my own breath–––
my respiration and inspiration, the beating of my heart, the
passing of blood and air through my lungs,
the sound of the belch’d words of my voice
loos’d to the song of me rising
from bed and meeting the sun.

Read me and you shall possess the origin of all poems:
the sun and your self.
I have heard the talk of my sweet soul––proof of the equanimity
of things silent and hearty and clean,
and I am satisfied.

A loving bed-fellow withdraws, leaving me baskets of
the latest dates, discoveries, inventions, societies,
authors old and new, and love.
But they are not Me.
I stand amused and looking with side-curved head,
curious what will come next,

I witness and wait.
I believe in you.

Loaf with me on the grass.
I want the lull.
I like
how we lay––your head upon me––my brother, sister, lover, child.

What is remembrance
but the beautiful uncut hair of graves?
I wish I could die luckier,
new-wash’d and not contain’d between my hat and boots.
I am not earth. I am as immortal and fathomless as myself,
sweet-heart and old maid, lips that have smiled,
eyes that are the begetters of children.

I see the little one in its cradle,
the bushy hill,
the corpse on the granite floor.
The impassive stones that receive and return so many echoes,
exclamations of women who buried speech.
I mind the resonance of them.
I come and I depart, roll head over heels and tangle my hair full of wisps.

Alone,
far in the wilds and mountains, amazed, my eyes settle in my boots
and you should have been with us that day I saw the marriage
of awkwardness and lonesome––dancing and laughing along the beach,
their bodies an unseen temple.

The sun fallsand I do not stop there.

What you express in your eyes seems to me more
than all the print I have read in my life.
I believe and acknowledge the look like an invitation––
Listening close, find its purposes.
I see in them and myself the same old law.

I can eat and sleep with them and hark to the musical rain,
the one-year wife, recovering and happy.
I am old and young, foolish and wise.

Prodigal, you have given me love — therefore I to you give
unspeakable passionate love. I behold your crooked inviting fingers.
I too am of all phases that sleep in each others’ arms.
I am not the poet of virtue. I moisten the roots of all that has grown.
I find a balance. There is no better than it and now.
I believe in seeing, hearing, feeling,
Breast that presses against other breasts, it shall be you!
Vapors lighting and shading my face it shall be you!
You sweaty brooks and dews it shall be you!
Hands I have taken, face I have kiss’d, mortal I have ever
touch’d, it shall be you.
I dote on myself, the air tastes good to my palate.
My voice goes after what my eyes cannot reach.
Speech is the twin of my vision. With the hush of my lips, I wholly confound the skeptic.

Now I will do nothing but listen,

I hear bravuras of birds, bustle of growing wheat, gossip of
flames, clack of sticks cooking my meals.
I hear the sound I love––the sound of the human voice.
I hear all sounds running together, combined, fused or following,
The angry base of disjointed friendship, the faint tones of waves,
I lose my breath.

I talk wildly, I have lost my wits..
All truths wait in all things,

Down a lane or along the beach,
my right and left arms round the sides of two friends,
and I in the middle; voyaging to every port to dicker and adventure,
Taking them all for what they are worth and not a cent more,

It is time to explain myself.
I am the teacher .
My words itch at your ears till you understand them.
I act as the tongue of you,
Tied in your mouth, in mine it begins to be loosen’d.
The farm-boy ploughing in the field feels good at the sound of my voice.
The young mother and old mother comprehend me,
each hour of the twenty-four I find letters dropt in the street,
and I leave them where they are, for I know that
Others will punctually come for ever and ever.
I hear you whispering there O stars,O suns — O grass of graves.
If you do not say any thing how can I say any thing?
The past and present wilt. I have emptied them.

Who wishes to walk with me?
not a bit tamed, untranslatable,
I depart as air,
bequeath myself to the grass.
If you want me again, look for me.
Missing me one place, search another.
I stop somewhere, waiting for you.

Anagram Poem: Day 24 of NaPoWriMo

For some reason, I couldn’t get onto the internet yesterday afternoon or last night so I am just posting this now.  It was written yesterday but not posted until today.

(The following poem is made up entirely of words that can be made from the letters in my name (Ms. Judith Kay Dykstra-Brown). For the purpose of theme, I have broken this rule in the last stanza. A friend who read it thought it was too negative, but it is all meant to be funny. I had to make use of the words I could make.  Just try writing a poem with no e’s!!!)

About Moi

Thou art drunk and so rowdy;
you don’t stand to win.
Your body is dowdy;
your hair is so thin.

Thou art a word-junky
both bawdy and wry.
Your workstand so junky;
your wit is so dry.

Your Ma’s from a bowry;
your daddy was bust,
so your sad dowry
was junky with rust.

Your sis was so bratty,
but now is a nun.
Your butt is both tatty
and broad as a hun.

A byword for wordy,
your work is not art.
Your story’s too dirty,
a bard thou art not!

I may do b-tt-r
wh-n I start to think,
As my d-arth of this l-tt-r
just starts moi to drink!